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vavavant

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Hey people,

I am back with new maps. Before everything, credit to Quro for the palm trees (He made the palm trees). Rate 0 to 10 please and explain, if you want!:)

Valencia Island
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/01ValenciaIsland-1.png

Tangelo Island
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/02TangeloIsland.png

Mikan Island
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/03MikanIsland.png

.:Maps For The Safari Zone:.

Safari Zone - Part A:
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/SafariZoneA.png

Safari Zone - Part B:
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/SafariZone-PartB.png

~.:Vavavant:.~
 
I've noticed a few things wrong with mos of these maps. To make it easier, I will list them.
1. You used Evergreen Trees (Corniferous) in a tropicial (I'm thinking) area. Please just either take the Evergreens out, or add more palm trees to where they were.
2. You didn't have a sea! Why wouldn't you have a sea on a map an island? It's really not that hard to put one in.
3. You used really big white spaces, which makes the image too big so here is what I have to say to fix that. First, go into Paint and get the island itself. Next, move it to the top-left corner as far as it will go without cutting any piece off. Now, go to the bottom right and grab the square. Move it up towards the top left, and make sure you don't cut off your map. If you do, then just go to edit "undo". Now save, it and put a sea in. Then there will be no white space at all, and oh yeah, save in imageshack.us so your image will not be resized.
4. I saw that in your Safari Zone, you had the trees outlining the zone wrong. There are supposed to be little "spaces" between the trees adding more difference to them.
5. Also, I noticed that your trees at the top of the Safari Zone have just ended, without continuing. You'll have to add more trees at the top.
6. You mixed R/S/E tiles with Fr/Lg tiles. BIG no no. You have to pick one, and I would go with FrLg because then all you have to change is the outline that goes around the map, you know, the brown part.
7. Your lake formation is bad. Come on, be realistic! Lakes don't form in perfect circles! They dont form in perfect squares either. They form in different shapes, and different sizes. Fix that as well.
8. On Tangelo Island, the back elevation is just hanging off! Those sort of things can't happen, because it would have broken off by now. Also, the land doesn't form in a perfect rectangle every time either.

Well, I think that's it. Other than all of the previous things stated, you maps are pretty good. You have a lot of potential. Overall map rating: 6/10.
 
Rayquaza777 said:
I've noticed a few things wrong with mos of these maps. To make it easier, I will list them.
1. You used Evergreen Trees (Corniferous) in a tropicial (I'm thinking) area. Please just either take the Evergreens out, or add more palm trees to where they were.
2. You didn't have a sea! Why wouldn't you have a sea on a map an island? It's really not that hard to put one in.
3. You used really big white spaces, which makes the image too big so here is what I have to say to fix that. First, go into Paint and get the island itself. Next, move it to the top-left corner as far as it will go without cutting any piece off. Now, go to the bottom right and grab the square. Move it up towards the top left, and make sure you don't cut off your map. If you do, then just go to edit "undo". Now save, it and put a sea in. Then there will be no white space at all, and oh yeah, save in imageshack.us so your image will not be resized.
4. I saw that in your Safari Zone, you had the trees outlining the zone wrong. There are supposed to be little "spaces" between the trees adding more difference to them.
5. Also, I noticed that your trees at the top of the Safari Zone have just ended, without continuing. You'll have to add more trees at the top.
6. You mixed R/S/E tiles with Fr/Lg tiles. BIG no no. You have to pick one, and I would go with FrLg because then all you have to change is the outline that goes around the map, you know, the brown part.
7. Your lake formation is bad. Come on, be realistic! Lakes don't form in perfect circles! They dont form in perfect squares either. They form in different shapes, and different sizes. Fix that as well.
8. On Tangelo Island, the back elevation is just hanging off! Those sort of things can't happen, because it would have broken off by now. Also, the land doesn't form in a perfect rectangle every time either.

Well, I think that's it. Other than all of the previous things stated, you maps are pretty good. You have a lot of potential. Overall map rating: 6/10.
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I AM TOTALLY SORRY!:(:(:( But your maps are not THAT better then mines....
 
vavavant said:
I AM TOTALLY SORRY!:(:(:( But your maps are not THAT better then mines....
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How about instead of whining about the crit Ray777 gave you, try reading it and improving your maps. I personally, thought the island should have the water shown so it looks like an island, not a desolate place of nowhere.
 
They are nice, but they are too big. Or you add more things or make them smaller. Also, try being more realistic and using less geometrical forms. Nature isn't like that.
 
Well...The water isn't reeally THE island...Anyway, Tiago islands aren't supposed to be small in pokemon games.
 
I AM TOTALLY SORRY! But your maps are not THAT better then mines....
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Um... grow up. If you post your maps on here to get crit, accept it and don't wine. >>

The palm trees leave alot of space between them, and there aren't any palm tree forests, so they look very odd clumped together. Also, like stated earlier, an island is surrounded by water, and these would look ALOT better with some sort of water surrounding the islands, and maybe some kind of port?

Also, your trees in Safari Zone part B don't line up at the bottom, the areas don't connect, and at the top you have alot of empty space. Plus, I just realized, the shadows below the tree look very oddly colored next to the grass.

So yeah. >>
 
About the Safari trees, ok. But palm trees, no. It actually exict Palm Trees Forest (I think...)
 
Palm forest- good, but your maps are really geometrical- they look artificial.
Look other people's maps and you'll see difference. And: never save as jpg!!!
Remember: jpg is evil! If picture is good in png and bmp, it is ugly in jpg!
 
Mex said:
Palm forest- good, but your maps are really geometrical- they look artificial.
Look other people's maps and you'll see difference. And: never save as jpg!!!
Remember: jpg is evil! If picture is good in png and bmp, it is ugly in jpg!
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hehe...Your right. Wher not in a Geometrical class...Anyway, I save them as '' PNG ''.
 
I searched your maps through Paint- they are jpg. Maybe they were jpg
before uploading? And: resize them- they are too small for usual maps.
 
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