My first deck

[Black Diaruga]

This is my first attempt to make a good deck, so I want to know if Im doing it right. This is my deck:

11 Pokémon

1 Torchic PK 67
2 Torchic EM 69
1 Torchic CG 66
2 Combusken PK 29
1 Blaziken EM 1
1 Blaziken HP 20
2 Blaziken ex CG 90
Holon's Magneton DS 23

30 Trainers

3 Scott PK 81
4 Holon Mentor DF 75
4 Professor Elm's Traning Method DF 79
1 Bebe's Search MT 109
1 Rare Candy EM 83
2 Castaway CG 72
2 Holon Adventurer 85 HP
4 Holon Transciever DS 98
2 TV Reporter DF 82
3 Buffer Piece DF 72
1 Strenght Charm 81 DF
2 Energy Search DP 117
1 Holon Scientist DS 97

19 Energy

8 Fire Energy
5 Fighting Energy
4 Rainbow Energy LM 81
2 Cyclone Energy PK 90

Is this deck good?

 

[Esperante]

Aside from the fact that you have only 4 basics and they're all very easily killable, yeah, this deck isn't that bad.

-1 Holon's Magneton
-1 Blaziken EM
-4 Holon Transciever
-1 Holon Scientist
-4 Rainbow Energy

Now your deck is legal in America!

 

[Black Diaruga]

I took out those 11 cards and replaced them with these:

1 Steven`s Advice
2 Master Ball
2 Rare Candy
1 Lake Boundary
3 Multi Energy
2 Scramble Energy

Some of these are from sets before Holon Phantoms but were reprinted in legal sets.