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My Sprites

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FiRE PoKEmoN MastA

Beginning Trainer
I've done a thread like this before but I can't seem to find it, anyways I'm just putting some new sprtes of mine up. I'm open for criticism but plz don't be too harsh, I'm a noob at Spriting

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A million pplz have probably done this before me and if they have I would like them to know that this is my own (well idea) Camerupt with smoke everywhere.

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This one will probably get most criticism because it is a pretty sloppy job and I made it on my old computer which doesn't let me save as PNG format, but my new one does
 
Is the camerupt just a recolor? Your pikachu was an okay idea, but do you notice how it's border looks strange? You forgot to recolor it, too. ^^
 
yeah I know about the Pikacross, and the Camerupt is basically a recolor, but its a shiny camerupt and I've just coloured the eyes red and the 3 rings red, to sort of represent lava/ anger kinda stuff.
 
Pochama Master said:
There okay but you didnt even change the outline!!
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I know, but Pikacross I did on my old computer, n a rush and couldn't save it as a PNG file. I'll redo him, and then we'll see what he's like
 
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This is a trainer card I did for myself, its not bad but its ok
 
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Revamp of my old one, relizing how much better I could make it

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Made this for a friend who isn't on the forum
 
They'd look better with the official sprites now they're out imo, and mabye with a picture for a background in each box.

Camperupt's hump thing is coloured red for no reason.
Pikachu/Heracross is a nice idead, but it needs recolouring and more Hera.
 
I don't know how to make trainer cards with the official sprites and for starters I can't find the DP official sprites to use.

Camerupts hump is coloured red for lava, not for no reason. it was supposed to be after/during an eruption of its humps. I have said before I would redo Pikacross and put better effort into it. I have a new mix and I think it's better than my previous ones, well maybe except for salayena, which would look awesome if it was a PNG file.

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that's Salayena, my favourite sprite and it was my second. I'm gonna make a Trainers Card with my customs...
 
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The new and (hopefully) improved Pikacross. I tried to put a lot more effort into this and in my opinion it looks much better
 
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Lucarblade, mix between Lucario and Elblade (Male evo of Kirlia)

Will get round to makin Trainer Card with proper sprites soon :D
 
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The Lucarblade looks cool but thew outline looks... awkward. o_o
 
The smoke on camerupt is from torcoal isnt it?
I noticed it was the same when I was looking through my pokedex last night
 
The first ones colouring is terrible and i dont even get what its supposed to be. and the second one, if you know its sloppy why are you showing it, if you know your going to get bad crit from it. the outline is still from pikachus' colours, and the horn is too big for its head.
 
look, if you don't get what its supposed to be then don't talk about it. as for the second one I posted it because its good to get criticism so you know what you can improve on. If you think my sprites stink thats fine with me but if you don't make any sprites or do anything related to sprites why should you be having a go at mine?
 
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