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[cyclone ace]

empoleon@splash plate
torrent
surf
flash cannon
hydro cannon
drill peck

alakazam@mind plate
inner focus
trick
shockwave
psycho cut
psychic

arcanine@scope lens
intimidate
roar
ember
overheat
extremespeed

claydol@?
levitate
hyper beam
psybeam
ancient power
selfdestruct

staraptor@sky plate
intimidate
quick attack
aerial ace
fly
endeavor

Roserade@?
poison point
mega drain
solarbeam
sunny day
sludge bomb

 

[DragonMasterJericho]

Sorry, but few people will rate a team unless you offer up the EVs and the natures of your pokemon. I won't either cause there is little I could calculate with what you have now.

What I can tell you is that you should never use type boosting items like the Plates, its not worth it when you could give your poke and Expert Belt or something and get just as big a boost for all of your attacks.



EDIT: Score, rank up

 

[cyclone ace]

opps, well thks

 

[MrNude]

empoleon@ Choice Scarf
torrent
Surf
Ice Beam
Earthquake / Drill Peck
Flash Cannon

Earthquake kills Magnezone, Drill Peck kills Heracross. Although they both have a shot at destroying you first. That's why you have Choice Scarf.

alakazam@ Choice Specs
inner focus
Trick
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Psychic

Choice Specs will make your attacks INCREDIBLY strong. If you need to, you can use Trick to screw over one of your opponent's pokemon.

arcanine@ Life Orb
intimidate
Iron Tail / Return
Flare Blitz
overheat
extremespeed

This thing will do a LOT of damage. Don't expect him to live long though.

claydol@ Leftovers
levitate
Earthquake
Psychic / Rockslide
Rapid Spin
Explosion

Earthquake for STAB (Same Type Attack Boost, i'm assuming you don't know). Psychic is stronger then Rock Slide, but Alakazam has Psychic, so Rock Slide will help your team more. Rapid Spin to remove Stealth Rock / Spikes, and Explosion because it's awesome.

staraptor@Choice Band
intimidate
Brave Bird
Close Combat
U-Turn
Return

It hits hard. Really REALLY hard.

Roserade@ Expert Belt
poison point
Energy Ball
Extrasensory
Shadow Ball
sludge bomb

Meh, do whatever you can to hurt the enemy. You need to breed to get Extrasensory though.

My changes in BOLD.

 

[Silver Suicune]

First of all, remove ALL of the type boosting items.
Then, proceed to remove all second same-type moves on the same pokemon.
Third, learn about Special/Physical Split.
Fourth, add natures and EVs.


BTW, there is a second page if you want to bump your thread. So stop making so many of these.

 

[DragonMasterJericho]

opps, well thks

Its no problem, because you are obviously new here. If you need to learn the formats and rules people adhere to read some of the sticky threads at the top of the forums. If you need help with anything don't be shy about Private Messaging me, I'm always willing to help.