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[Poliwhirl]

Eggs

This was a Request tht came out bad

AKA Me First Egg

Mixes

-This one is Really Bad

-Bad

-Bad

Thanks To Pokesho

Thanks to Pokesho This Was a 3 Way Mix

Pixel Overs

This looks Pretty Bad

Removes

Recolours

Revamps

- AKA My First Revamp

Devamps

AKA My First Devamp

XD Shadows

AKA My First XD Shadow

Trainer Recolours

Base was By RadiataAlchemist

Base Sprite By Pokesho

Last Sprite by Sapphire Dragon of Spriter Resorce

More Coming Soon!

 

[miken park]

Your revamps lack shading of both kinds and the outline only has one colour. Your devamp has to many shades to be a devamp. On you first pokesho mix the leafy thing doesn't look attached to its body and also the totdile still has alot of blue on it's face and around it's outline.

 

[Magical Trevor]

I love everything except the eggs and revamps. Everone's seen too many Mew Revamps and I don' reall lik the Paras egg

 

[miken park]

Mutten, This is the final straw. I am SICK of you saying I love this, I love that , wow your sprites are awesome. It is useless comments and praticly spam. So please, Stop it.(And be grateful I didn't yell my head of at you)

 

[Ilex]

Yes, listen to him because he is a mod and has authority over your posts, and would never spam in a topic telling you that you are spamming. Never


The eggs ae very simple, but are a good way to start on spriting. The spots on the first and last egg look wierd, I hope you didn't use default paint colors on them.
The mixes have a lot of copy-and-paste in them, but you did it in a nice way.
Your best mix would be the Scyther, I really like it.
The Pokesho sprites are a bit messy though. Try using official sprites instead of them.
The pixel over has an outline problem, try making it more roundish, for a start. I can barely see the eyes in it.
I don't have a lot of crit on the rest of it, but the triner sprites at the end look very default-ish with the colors.

You're off to a good start in spriting, and you should be even better with more practice.

 

[miken park]

I'm sorry if I was spamming, I just had and Anger fit. XD, I'm a girl too Ilex.
Also, I'm not trying to mini mod if thats what you meant ^^;
I'm gonna finish reviewing these now any way..
Eggs: The way you put to much of arboks body an it makes it look like a walking egg.
Trainer recolours..
To much of that dark blue shade is used, I suggest using a different colour scheme for the next one,Unless you wanted them to be alll bluey.
Recolours The ghastly on looks quite messed up, especialy with the shading.

So, Keep trying!

~Tagg;195;

 

[Poliwhirl]

Arbiter 1- okay that means more work

mutten- It is a Krabby Egg

Arbiter post 2- No comment

Ilex- Thanks for the good tip. I also like the Scyther Mix, which was a request

Arbiter 3- Uh yes, that is bad egg, and the ghastly is just a recolour of a first shadow that i messed up on

 

[▼■DoomWing■▼]

you so stole those ideas for Shadows from me.You know, the eyes and colours XD

Actually, i'd say the only flaws in this thread is the tr.sprites and revamps.They are a bit too, well unshaded.Work on em.And as others said, work on the eggs aswell

 

[Poliwhirl]

 

[KirbyXD]

On some of your sprites you could improve on your shading and on the trainer sprites they look horrible.

 

[miken park]

Recolouring is the simplest form of spriting. It's O.K.

 

[Pokefan26]

you so stole those ideas for Shadows from me.You know, the eyes and colours

Not really, everybody does the eyes like that.

And Arbiter, you can atleast suggest to mutten to elaborate on his posts. Like giving full reviews. You have to help him out, not get angry at him.

 

[Poliwhirl]

kirby xd- i know that

╬HyPnOtIk╬ said to me he/she dont care