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hydroswirl

Water Pokemon Master
Warning!​

The following comic contains material that may be un-suitable for certain ages and/or certain people. The comic deals with mild sexuality, slightly suggestive themes, etc. Please view at your own risk.​


:Plot:

Follow Daniela and her pornstar Caterpie, "Glimmer" as they travel through the region of Kanto for what starts out as money and food...but turns into something far greater.

:Characters:

~Daniela
Daniela is a 14 year old girl who always was a fan of Pokemon, but never had the time, money or experience to go out on a journey. After certain events she got her shot and now she's hoping to do the best she can.

Pokemon - "Glimmer" the shiny Caterpie.

:Episodes:
[001] - Rape
[002] - Pants
[003] - Two for One
[004] - Nickname
[005] - Rare?
[006] - Love It
[007] - Padges

:Specials:
[01] - Makeover

:Current Episode:
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:Credits:
~Spriter's Resource - For all my sprites.
 
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First post! Woo!
Its good I like it! & Its funny too, keep it up!

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YOUR Gameboy
 
LGameboyR said:
First post! Woo!
Its good I like it! & Its funny too, keep it up!

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YOUR Gameboy
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Thanks for your comment! I will! :D *rushes off to make Episode 3*
 
immature jokes don't make a comic funny. please dumb it down to a lower level before continuing. though I must applaude you on your spriting abilities; from what I see, you're pretty skilled compared to most newbies at Serebii.
 
Naked jokes? :/
They have been done to death, and there's so much more better material than that.

Anyways, the speech bubbles are made well, and the comic is pretty good visually. There are some grammatical errors, where they said "your" instead of "you're". It's no big deal. But I don't know where you're going with the plot, though.
 
Double Post. >_>
 
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New Episode: Two for One

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NEO GOHAN`;Yesterday 8:33 PM said:
immature jokes don't make a comic funny. please dumb it down to a lower level before continuing. though I must applaude you on your spriting abilities; from what I see, you're pretty skilled compared to most newbies at Serebii.
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Thanks, I'll try to tone down the sex jokes from now on. :)


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Naked jokes? :/
They have been done to death, and there's so much more better material than that.

Anyways, the speech bubbles are made well, and the comic is pretty good visually. There are some grammatical errors, where they said "your" instead of "you're". It's no big deal. But I don't know where you're going with the plot, though.
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Thank you! :D I'll try to come up with more original stuff for my future episodes!
 
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Sorry to double post, but I made another comic. This one is more of a plot-advancer. And it's transparent. Yay, for transparencies! :D

Also, I updated the info on the first post! :D

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hydroswirl said:
Sorry to double post, but I made another comic. This one is more of a plot-advancer. And it's transparent. Yay, for transparencies! :D

Also, I updated the info on the first post! :D

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That one was funny keep it up!
 
A nice silly comic.
Though the humor was a bit crude at first, you seem to be moving away from that, just like Pokemon-X did. Are you using paint or photoshop? If you're using paint it's harder to fix spelling errors that's why you should really proofread it at first. Photoshop on the other hand, errors can be easily fixed because of the layering and junk. Love the caterpie. I voted your comic a 4, increasing the rating~

Oh yeah, I love the text bubbles, I wish I could do bubbles like that. :X
 
Man, this is the best comic I've seen since Pokechow. The humour is kind of the same but none the less it rocks hard. Keep up the good work.

jebus
 
Oh My God! I am so sorry everyone! My computer crashed, and I lost everything, and school started and I had NO time to repair, I jsut got it back up. I re-saved and re-did everything and I'm back with a a brand new episode. Enjoy!

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Thanks for all your comments guys! And yes, I use Paint to make the comic! :P
 
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I'm going to start out by saying that I could see this going somewhere, and continue to say that certain things are not very impressive and need to be worked on.

You really need to develop your own personal style. I can see it beginning to grow, but mostly I thought "PokéChow" when I read it. Some of the lines, particularly in "Nickname" are... very similar to lines I've used in a few episodes.

Your comic is the most offensive I have ever seen on SPPf. I don't even think PokéChow is as provocative in some ways... The mother and daughter are both prostitutes... It's just like "Whoa..." I'll admit that I laughed when Oak came out of the cabinet, but it was almost too much... The whole scenario seemed reminiscent of Marin and Janice's discussion about stardust.

Using a character like May and slapping on a new name is just lazy. Even if you yourself aren't talented in spriting you can always ask someone in the Fan Sprites forum to come up with one for you. I like that Glimmer has his own personality.

And you really need to do something about your speech bubbles... They look pretty sloppy. If you're worried about using the same kind that I do, which really isn't a problem, use another of the boxes you'll find at the Spriter's Resource.

Give or take, I like Pokebubble, despite some of my issues with it. I hope you'll continue to work hard and improve.
 
Even the lay layout, though inferiour, is reminiscent of Pokechow. There are some chunks missing out of the PokeBubble title, BTW.

Actually reading through, though hilarious at times (I love the Caterpies raping the house) it is incredibly simliar to Pokechow, but it has potential so I hope we can expect more original work in the future.
 
Thanks for both of your comments. I haven't really read many episodes of PokeChow but I read some more, and I can definately see the similarity.

I'll definately try to develop my "own" style, however I do that. And didn't really want to change the May sprites and what not because well, the heroes always have the stand-out-ish sprites, so I just used that. Meh, maybe I'll try editing it.

*makes a special episode*

But thank you, I'm sure this'll all help me because really great at comics. And yes, re-reading the comics, I do realize that the jokes were rather...ya. I'm trying to step away form that now ('cept for ol' Glimmer) and actually get some sort of plot going.

Thanks. :)
 
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