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Redemption

Discussion in 'Pokémon Generation III Discussion' started by Vegito789, Jul 29, 2013.

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  1. Vegito789

    Vegito789 New Member

    1/8192.
    0.0122%.
    That is the chances of encountering a shiny Pokemon. My first encounter with one was an Exeggcute, in the Safari Zone(FR). I was not successful at capturing.
    Fast forward two years to me going through a new play of LG. I just made it to Six Island, and surfed next to the braille door. Then, a wild encounter.
    Marill.
    I wasn't surprised, as I had seen three on my way down. But after its battle cry, I didn't immediately release my Pokemon. I heard a sparkle sound, and noticed that this Marill was colored closer to teal than dark blue.
    My eyes widened as I realized what was happening, and quickly I swapped out my lvl 52 Lapras for a 15 Onix. I chose strength for my attack, and winced as I saw the Shiny's hp dwindle. When it stopped just above half health, I released the breath I was holding in, and prayed that what I did next would work.
    Ultra Ball, go!
    One wiggle.
    One more.
    Another.
    Stop.
     
  2. Shymain

    Shymain Shaymin Lover

    Nice! This is a pretty good piece of work!

    By the way, this is called a microfiction, so it would go in the Fan Fiction section.

    You need a bit of work on your grammar, but mostly this is great!

    You might want to think about re-writing this so it's significantly longer, okay?

    Keep Writing!

    -Shymain
     
  3. Craig T

    Craig T Banned

    I wish I could redeem myself when I lost a chance to capture a Unown because my batteries died out. :/
     
  4. Nutter t.KK

    Nutter t.KK can Mega Evolve!

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