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Revamp

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stardust

I'm Mega Man!!!
Well here is a revamp I just did and it needs some work. Opinions please.:)
http://i3.*******.com/2qimq34.png
 
It looks half-revamp half-devamp.
 
Needs work with shading on some parts. Also the outline is all black if you look at all the sprites in the new games i doubt you coud find 1 with an all black outline have you read a tutorial on revamping? it could help lots
 
You forgot to revamp the flower completely. You do reliaze Revamping is considered taking a sprite, re-shading it, and maybe editing it to fit its current format. You did the re-shading, but never edited the flower. I remember when I did this exact revamp, and heres mine
Meganium-V2.png
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Now note, I didn't shade it well enough, but notice what I did to the flower. In future Revamps, try and make sure all parts are up to date.
 
FullaRapNPokemon said:
You forgot to revamp the flower completely. You do reliaze Revamping is considered taking a sprite, re-shading it, and maybe editing it to fit its current format. You did the re-shading, but never edited the flower. I remember when I did this exact revamp, and heres mine
Meganium-V2.png
.

Now note, I didn't shade it well enough, but notice what I did to the flower. In future Revamps, try and make sure all parts are up to date.
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it look much better now ( but fix the little bump that on the neck )
 
thats FullaRapNPokemon 's revamp isnt it lol not stardust's but stardust should fix their flower to look like that 1
 
well i have to agree with shadow weavile that the body is good but the flower
is really messed up make it like the one in FullaRapNPokemon 's revamp
 
The body is rather pillow shaded.
The head could use more black outline.
The flower is just plain bad, shading and outlining.
 
Yes I know it is messed up. I'm going to fix it. This is my second revamp but somehow my first was better. I have used a revamping guide but still have major trouble with shading. Thanks for the comments.
 
I tried to fix the flower.
http://i13.*******.com/2yvlxdw.png

And heres my first ever.
http://i14.*******.com/4fw1w85.png
 
Areas with darker shades you should have more black outline. There should be a black outline more around the tail and legs.

Also, the light shadeing on its neck is a straight line and makes it look weird. The light shadeing should follow the neck shape. Like how the neck is bent in and leaning to the right. The light shadeing should to if you want it to look better.

Try makeing more and you should get better.
 
POKErUsAm said:
Areas with darker shades you should have more black outline. There should be a black outline more around the tail and legs.

Also, the light shadeing on its neck is a straight line and makes it look weird. The light shadeing should follow the neck shape. Like how the neck is bent in and leaning to the right. The light shadeing should to if you want it to look better.

Try makeing more and you should get better.
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Thanks thats what I wasnt sure about outlines and shading.
 
Oh yeah, and there is a spec of the middle shadeing at the end of the tail.

Instead of working on one, try revamping some new things that have more detail. Ok? I hope that makes sence to you.
 
Here I tried. I know its better than when I first posted it but still not quite as good as FullaRapNPokemon 's revamp.
http://i13.*******.com/490bo75.png
 
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