rmt please

[Pokemon Trainer 1]

skarmory
focus band
impish
252d, 230a, 28s

steath rock
roar
drill peack
doost

slaking
muscle band
adamant
250a, 252hp,8d

giga impact
yawn
slack off
hammer arm

electivire
expert belt
addy
252a, 252s, 6hp

ice punch
thunder punch
cross chop
eq

feraligar
scope lens
addy
228a, 252d, 20s, 8hp

aqua tail
eq
ice punch
drragon dance

dragonite
life orb
add
252a, 252s, 6hp

outrage
fire punch
roost
dd

porygon z
wise glasses
modest
252sa, 252s 6hp

psychic
ice beam
thunder bolt
tri attack

thank you for your help

 

[Alzi]

This team needs serious help x_x....

Ok first of items like Focus Band have a 10% chance of working which is :/ your rather better of using focus sash to survive an KOing move. Skarmory doesn't need those kinda items because it's a pysical wall it's job is to switch into somthing that it can scare the hell out off i mean your not going to switch it into a special sweeper so it doesn't need those kind of items. Give it leftovers instead.

Skarmory@Leftovers
Impish 252 hp / 252 def / 6 spd
-Spikes
-Whirlwind
-Drill Peck
-Roost

Spikes is there for the usual but if you want you can use stealth rock instead. Whirlwind works better then roar since it can hit pokemon with the sound proof trait. Also you spelt roost wrong lol you spelt it doost. And write down your Ev's the way i did so people can read them better and with a wall you must always max out hp. And use this form instead:

POKEMON@ITEM
TRAIT:
NATURE:
EV'S
-ATTACK 1
-ATTACK 2
-ATTACK 3
-ATTACK 4

That should make others read it easier.

 

[Silver Suicune]

I'm kind of getting a headache from reading the lack of capitals, punctuation and spelling.

Slaking works better with a Choice Band set
-Return
-Shadow Claw
-Earthquake
-Focus Punch

 

[~-Overheat-~]

Slaking@Choice Band
Adamant
252 attack 252 hp 6 speed
Traunt

Giga Impact
Focus Punch
Shadow Claw
Fire Blast/Thunderbolt/Earthquake