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[phoenix8]

This is my first one...

Focus Band

252 Attack
252 Speed

Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Swords Dance
Brick Break

Charcoal

252 Speed
200 Special Attack
52 Attack

Flamethrower
Thunderfang
Roar
Toxic

Leftovers

252 Special Defense
200 Defense
52 Special Attack

Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Aqua Ring

Focus Sash

252 Attack
252 Speed

Nightslash
Confuse Ray
Thunderwave
Toxic

Mind Plate

252 Special Attack
252 Speed

Psychic
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Guard Swap

Quick Claw

252 Defense
252 Special Defense

Thunderbolt
Magnet Rise
Barrier
Flash Cannon

 

[TheGreatRandoxy]

Not bad for a 1st try,mine was rubbish!Anyway back on topic,you need some serious help with your items!
Give Garchomp something like Life Orb or Expert Belt 'cos then it'll be awesome

For Arcanine,choose 1 of these http://www.serebii.net/potw-dp/059.shtml

Milotic needs a complete revamp!I'm no expert, but i think this set is quite good:
Milotic@Lefties
Calm
200-Sp.Def & Speed,110-Sp.Attk
Surf
Hypnosis
Light Screen
Recover

Honchkrow is also kinda messed up.Try this Physical Sweeper set
Honchkrow@Choice Band
Jolly
252-Attk & Speed,6-HP
Night Slash
Drill Peck
Pursuit
Return


Alakazam is almost OK,just change the item to Choice Specs,and give him Trick instead of Guard Swap


With Magnezone,switch Quck Claw for Focus Sash,Give it Mirror Coat instead of Barrier, & give it 252 Sp.Attk & Speed EVs,with 4 in HP


Hope I helped!

 

[cloudk]

This is my first one...

Focus Band life orb/leftovers
adamant,252att,252spe,4hp
252 Attack
252 Speed

Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Swords Dance
Brick Break fire fang/fire blast

Fire fang/blast for skarmory and bronzong. Standard sword dance set. Be wary of pokemon that can outspeed you like weaville and starmie.

Charcoal life orb
naive,228att,92spa,188spe
252 Speed
200 Special Attack
52 Attack

Flamethrower overheat
Thunderfang flare blitz
Roar extremespeed/dragon pulse
Toxic HP electric/ground

An underated wall breaker. pretty self explainatory

Leftovers
modest,252 HP / 232 Def / 24 SpA
252 Special Defense
200 Defense
52 Special Attack

Surf
Ice Beam
Recover rest
Aqua Ring sleep talk

Standard restalk milotic

Focus Sashchoice scarf
adamant,4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
252 Attack
252 Speed

Nightslash
Confuse Ray drill peck
Thunderwave pursuit
Toxic steel wing

Night slash and drill peck for stab. Pursuit for tapping and steel wing for T-tar.

Mind Platechoice spec
modest/timid,252spa,252spe,4hp
252 Special Attack
252 Speed

Psychic
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball grass knot/HP fire
Guard Swap trick

Quick Claw leftovers
modest,172 HP / 252 SpA / 84 Spe
252 Defense
252 Special Defense

Thunderbolt
Magnet Rise
Barriersubsitute
Flash CannonHP ice

standard steel killer. Magnet rise to avoid EQ from forteress and friends. Hp ice for grounds. Subsitute for scouting and status attacks and T-bolt for stab

Using UU pokemon in a OU team when you're new is asking for trouble. Ditch honchkrow and arcanine. Honchkrow is a physical sweeper and arcanine is a wall breaker. Better physical sweepers like heracross or T-tar can be used and mixape and mixvire are THE wallbreakers.

Wrong choice of item,pokemon,evs and moves. Get more experience and rise up to the rank of competitive battlers.

 

[Mandude]

Honchcrow with a person new to battling = lots of losses.
Also you should give chomp life orb or choice items,
Alakazam choice specs, and ditch arcanine.

 

[Shadow_Blaze]

please post natures next time

first off, focus band is a hax item and is banned from competitive play -_-, and no need to use it on chomp since 1 it can take a hit and 2 it is ment to strike first and kill first, run a Scarf on it, fire fang > Brick break

I'd give RK9 a life orb and make it the lead:

RK9@Life orb
Jolly nature
252 Atk/252 Spd/6 HP
-Extreeme spd
-Crunch
-Flare blitz
-Thunder fang

I personally prefer restalk milo:

Milo@Leftovers
Bold nature
252 HP/176 Def/76 SpDef/6 SpAtk
-Surf
-Ice BEam
-Rest
-Sleep talk

Give hachcrow leftovers and run it adamant with sucker punch, drill peck, Night slah and SD

Run choice specs on zam, and trick > guard swap

Sub > Barier and HP ice > Flash cannon on zone

 

[cloudk]

@Shadow blaze:You shouldn't run choice scarf with SD on the moveset >_>