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This is my team please help out and rate =)

Shuckle-timid-lum berry
Ev:Hp-252/Def-132/Spd-126
Moves:Power trick
Rest
Earthquake
Sludge Bomb

Dragonite-Adament
Ev:Attack-252/Speed-252
Moves:Flamethrower
Dragon Dance
Aerial Ace
Outrage

Electravire-Adament
Ev:Attack-252/Speed-252
Moves:Earthquake
Icepunch
Thunderpunch
Brick Break

Rhyperior-Naughty
Ev:Att-252/Hp-126/Def-132
Moves:Earthquake
Avalanche
Stelth Rock
Roar

Alakazam-Modest-Twisted spoons
Ev:Spa-252/Speed-252
Moves:Grass Knot
Psychic
Focus Blast
Calm Mind

Octillery-Naughty-Scoope lens
Ev:Att-126/Spa-132/Speed-252
Moves:Ice Beam
Thunder wave
Gunk Shot
Flamethrower

Yea so this is my team. Tell me what u think
 
Shuckle: Dont bother. Theres way, way better walls available.

Dragonite: Fire Punch over Flamethrower. Jolly nature. Only use outrage if you give him the Persim Berry. If not, use Dragon Claw. Earthquake over Aerial Ace. It has higher base power even after STAB, more coverage and deals with rock types. Life Orb (unless Persim + Outrage is being used).

Electrivire: Give it the life orb or expert belt.

Rhypereor: Give it leftovers and Stone Edge or Rock Slide over Avelanche.

Alakazam: Focus Sash is needed if calm mind is being used. Energy ball over grass knot.

Octillery: Change him for a wall. It's defences are too low for a wall, it offences are good enough for a sweeper, but it's pathetic speed lets it down.
 
Shuckle: Dont bother. Theres way, way better walls available.

Dragonite: Fire Punch over Flamethrower. Jolly nature. Only use outrage if you give him the Persim Berry. If not, use Dragon Claw. Earthquake over Aerial Ace. It has higher base power even after STAB, more coverage and deals with rock types. Life Orb (unless Persim + Outrage is being used).

Electrivire: Give it the life orb or expert belt.

Rhypereor: Give it leftovers and Stone Edge or Rock Slide over Avelanche.

Alakazam: Focus Sash is needed if calm mind is being used. Energy ball over grass knot.

Octillery: Change him for a wall. It's defences are too low for a wall, it offences are good enough for a sweeper, but it's pathetic speed lets it down.

Not to be mean but if i wanted you to change the pokemon in my team i would have asked. But i didnt these are the pokemon ive chosen for my team and thats because im not going to be like every 1 else and use an intier team of pokemon that every 1 else is useing. i like these pokemon so dont tell me to change them. As for the other suggestions they completely kill the point of my team. Your suggested dragonite gets walled very easy by skar and steel. but not with flamethrower. Avalanche is there for a powerful move after roar with there switch of if they stick with the roar pokemon.
 
Shuckle: sux. really.
Octillery: ain't that great without trickroom. and stick Surf over Gunkshot as poison has terrible coverageand surf has STAB
Rhyperior: you need a rock STAB as rock is a very good offencive type. you don't really need roar IMO but hey, your choice. and leftovers for the item. or maybe try the choice band set; Stone edge/EQ/avalanche/megahorn
Alakazam: spoons suck. make it your lead with a trickspecs set; trick/Psychic/Focus bomb/energy ball
Dragonite: Fire blast>flamethrower. EQ over aerial ace to cover steels that aren't called Skarmory or Bronzorg. consider either lumberry or life orb for the item. and maybe Jolly natured as well for that extra boost in speed to surprise a few extra enemies who think they're faster than you :)
 
Right off the bat I can see that you have a bit of a walling problem. You need at least one or two Pokemon that wall effectively.

Also if you're desperate to use Shuckle...
It will be manhandled by any physical attack after Power Trick, so try and kill off anything that carries physical moves before bringing it into the field. On the same note, Timid does nothing for you seeing as Shuckle can't outrun a Caterpie. Give it Impish for more attacking power when you use PT. Gyro Ball or Stone Edge > Sludge Bomb. Finally, max out its Defense and HP.
 
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I think you should change Alakazam's item to Expert Belt. Twisted spoon only raises Psychic moves by 1.1 so its ultimately useless.

Also, walls don't go well with speed boosting natures. Try a defencive one.

Dragonite should have Dragon Claw over Outrage.
 
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