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[collynbertin]

ok here's my team that i want to use in online

Intro to my team...

i didn't just put a bunch of pokemon together that are used alot, i like to think of different and i hope i do that with this anyways i'm here to help make this better anyways with that said i give you... my team!

lead pokemon

typhlosion mild @ choice scarf
ability : blaze
ev: 252 sp atk 112 speed and 144 attack

-eruption
-overheat
-focus punch
-hp ice

lead and favorite pokemon can take a big chunck outta alot of pokemon and is pretty fast good lead imo not worried about taunt here only problem i can see is gyarados so.. might have to find something decent against him

bronzong sassy
@ leftovers/shed shell??
ability: levitate
ev's pretty sure 252 sp def/ 252 hp /6 def

-earthquake
-gyro ball
-stealth rock
-hypnosis

simple really stealth rock eq for magnezone, but if magnezone has magnet rise maybe i should switch earthquake? hypnosis for support mostly

sceptile timid @ choice specs
ability: overgrow
ev: 252 speed 252 sp atk 6 hp

-leaf storm
-dragon pulse
-hp ice
-focus blast

choice specs sceptile ... speed is there with timid and has pretty devent coverage... not many ppl would see this goin on

umbreon sassy @ leftovers
ability : synchronize
evs: 252 sp def 252 hp and 6 attack

-curse
-wish
-payback
-toxic

passes wish along to ppl like bronzong and curse for lower speed and higher attack for payback mainly sp def wall and it passes on status problems so i can come in on paralysis and pass it on to oponent (although i don't really want to) helps for discharge zapdoses

zapdos timid @ ??? (maybe wise glasses)
ability: pressure
ev's: 252 speed 252 sp attck

- heat wave
- hp ice
- discharge
- roost

roost takes off damage and gets rid of rock and ice weakness , great attacks with decent coverage hits steels like skarmory hard and can pound on bronzong a bit hp ice for pesky grasses like celebi or dragons flygon

slowbro bold @ leftovers
ability: oblivious
ev: 252 hp / 252 defense / 6 attack

-slack off
-calm mind
-ice beam
-surf

bulky water here with recovery can absord water specials a bit and fighting moves... calm mind up and then slack off damage helps out when it can




there's my team rate away and don't be gentle i like constructive criticism...

oh and i was thinking i might not need bronzong but could really use gyara counter and possibly rapid spinner to get rid of stealth rocks so i'm willing to move around the team for other pokes but as it is this is the team.

 

[cloudk]

You have no one to switch into heracross and electivire. Also, it appears that you try to be different for the sake of being different. I don't really see synergy in this team either.

Regarding the cross and vire problems, a swampert or a rotom appliance would help.
Also, if you're going to use wish on umbreon and switch around for your other members to get the recovery, then curse is redundant.

 

[kinder surprise]

Heatrans licking his fiery lips at this team. Can get Flash Fire from your oh so obvious lead.

Also CloudK, Bronzong counter Electivire ridicolously easy, along with half of OU.

Back to Heatran problem, Whilst I presume your Slowbro(which is running 6 Atk instead of 6 Sp.Atk btw) is infact your attempt at a Heatran counter, well from a Modest ScarfTran with Flash Fire activate Fire Blast will 2HKO: 49.75% - 58.38%

Along with that, A Flash Fire Fire Blast one or 2HK0s your entire team.

Replace Slowbro with Kingdra:

Kingdra@ Leftovers
Ability: Sniper
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk/ 160 HP/ 96 Spe

- Outrage
- Waterfall
- Dragon Dance
- Yawn/Substitute

Counters Heatran. EVs hit 230 Spe Outspeeding Max Spe Scizor and 4 Spe Gliscor.

Replace Umbreon with..I have to go. but seriously anything would be better. It cant tocuh steels. Which are the most common types int he metagame

 

[The Reverend A_K]

Umbreon has better things to do than curse, but if you really want to use one, run it with some Attack EVs. Probably around 52.