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Second Comic

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Sug915

I am short
Plot?
The speech bubbles could be better if the text was more inside of it than out. Oh yeah, give credits too.
 
the panels aren't equally spaced and the region name is terrible. it follows the childish stereotype that all country names end with "a" or "ia". One suggested form of name is to translate the name so it is unrecognizable. This is how the name absol(without sun) was made. You also made the panels huge. you should zoom in and crop to get a frame with more action and less blank space.
 
Do you know where I can get bubbles or do I have to make the bubbles?
 
make them yourself they arent that hard but make sure your txt fit in them b4 u insert them in the comic and make sure all the panels are the same size makes it look more presentable
 
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