JohnGazmon
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Ya know, I just love it when Chrome crashes when I’m just getting stuck into chapter one and I have to rewrite the entire prologue, and what of Ch. 1 i'd written. That’s just hilarious. Anyway, the beginnings of my fanfic. Not sure yet where I’m gonna go with this one, I’ve only got the bare bones at the moment. What I do know is that it will involve a resurgent Team Galactic and an unwilling journey.
And possibly the Pokemon Illuminati.
“Step aside, child.”
The man’s voice echoed around the dark antechamber. He stepped forward, dirt crumbling beneath his foot. Gusts of wind gently drifted in from outside, disturbing the burning torches that adorned the damp walls. His charge, a boy of no more than thirteen or fourteen years old, stepped back, blocking his path as their shadows danced upon the walls.
“No way” the boy replied, grasping a poke ball from his belt and holding it firmly before him. The man smirked as water from the damp chamber dripped down upon them both.
“Foolish choice, boy.” the man scolded him, reaching for his own poke ball - one adorned with a green and black design. He, too, held it firmly before him. The boy grit his teeth, activating the ball. A flash of light emerged from the ball, forming into the form of a small ball of gas. It floated in the air, baring it’s pointed fangs at the man. He blinked in shock at the Gastly that now floated between the two of them, but composed himself quickly, activating his own ball.
Dark mist emerged from the ball, forming itself into the shape of a large black dog, which stood before the boy's Gastly, unleashing a loud roar as it did so. It locked eyes with the Gastly.
There was no turning back now.
“Gastly, use night shade!” the boy called out. Hissing loudly, Gastly drew itself up, a swathe of darkness overcoming the room, extinguishing the torches and plunging them into darkness. From out of it, the large white eyes and gaping crimson maw of Gastly bore down upon the dog.
The man, however, did not order and attack, but allowed the dog to attack on it’s own merit. As Gastly’s face drew ever closer, the dog braced itself. Finally, as they were almost nose to nose, the dog reared onto it’s hind legs, landing it’s front paws onto the rocky floor and unleashing a howl, as a bust of dark energy emanated from it’s body, forcing Gastly back until it was almost nothing. Darkness fell once again, with just the eyes of Gastly and the dog remaining. The chamber was suddenly illuminated as a searing gout of flame erupted from the dog’s mouth, engulfing the weakened form of Gastly. The stream of fire subsided, and mysteriously, the torces re-lit themselves. There was no sign of Gastly, and the boy slumped to his knees, shattered.
He glanced up, a tear rolling down his face. Two people had joined them, standing on either side of the man as he recalled the Houndoom into it’s ball.
“Take him away.” the man ordered his cohorts, who quickly grabbed the small boy and dragged him away, towards the chamber’s entrance. He offered no resistance to them, almost dumbfounded by what had occurred. “Put him somewhere where he will no longer be a hinderance to my plans.”
The duo smirked, before disappearing out of the chamber. The man looked around, but the chamber, it seemed, was now truly empty. He strode forwards, towards the doorway the boy had been defending. Looking around once more, he grinned, before delving deeper into the cavern, and vanishing into the darkness.
Pebbles and small rocks clattered as the man's footsteps disturbed them from their resting places. They tumbled noisily down the slanted rock slope, causing more to become dislodged and tumble with them. They slid for some time before eventually emerging into another cave. The man, steadying himself with a hand on the damp roof, entered yet another chamber. It was bathed in a pale blue glow, emanating from a figure stood in the centre of the room. He stepped in quietly, avoiding the fallen rocks. The figure did not acknowledge his presence, continuing to either sleep, or purposefully ignore him.
"So." the man whispered, removing a device from his pocket "This is where you've been hiding".
And possibly the Pokemon Illuminati.
Shatterpoint
Prologue: A Sinister Agenda
Chapter One: A Red Letter Day
Chapter Two: Meeting Of Minds
Shatterpoint
PG-13
Prologue:
A Sinister Agenda
Prologue: A Sinister Agenda
Chapter One: A Red Letter Day
Chapter Two: Meeting Of Minds
Shatterpoint
PG-13
Prologue:
A Sinister Agenda
“Step aside, child.”
The man’s voice echoed around the dark antechamber. He stepped forward, dirt crumbling beneath his foot. Gusts of wind gently drifted in from outside, disturbing the burning torches that adorned the damp walls. His charge, a boy of no more than thirteen or fourteen years old, stepped back, blocking his path as their shadows danced upon the walls.
“No way” the boy replied, grasping a poke ball from his belt and holding it firmly before him. The man smirked as water from the damp chamber dripped down upon them both.
“Foolish choice, boy.” the man scolded him, reaching for his own poke ball - one adorned with a green and black design. He, too, held it firmly before him. The boy grit his teeth, activating the ball. A flash of light emerged from the ball, forming into the form of a small ball of gas. It floated in the air, baring it’s pointed fangs at the man. He blinked in shock at the Gastly that now floated between the two of them, but composed himself quickly, activating his own ball.
Dark mist emerged from the ball, forming itself into the shape of a large black dog, which stood before the boy's Gastly, unleashing a loud roar as it did so. It locked eyes with the Gastly.
There was no turning back now.
“Gastly, use night shade!” the boy called out. Hissing loudly, Gastly drew itself up, a swathe of darkness overcoming the room, extinguishing the torches and plunging them into darkness. From out of it, the large white eyes and gaping crimson maw of Gastly bore down upon the dog.
The man, however, did not order and attack, but allowed the dog to attack on it’s own merit. As Gastly’s face drew ever closer, the dog braced itself. Finally, as they were almost nose to nose, the dog reared onto it’s hind legs, landing it’s front paws onto the rocky floor and unleashing a howl, as a bust of dark energy emanated from it’s body, forcing Gastly back until it was almost nothing. Darkness fell once again, with just the eyes of Gastly and the dog remaining. The chamber was suddenly illuminated as a searing gout of flame erupted from the dog’s mouth, engulfing the weakened form of Gastly. The stream of fire subsided, and mysteriously, the torces re-lit themselves. There was no sign of Gastly, and the boy slumped to his knees, shattered.
He glanced up, a tear rolling down his face. Two people had joined them, standing on either side of the man as he recalled the Houndoom into it’s ball.
“Take him away.” the man ordered his cohorts, who quickly grabbed the small boy and dragged him away, towards the chamber’s entrance. He offered no resistance to them, almost dumbfounded by what had occurred. “Put him somewhere where he will no longer be a hinderance to my plans.”
The duo smirked, before disappearing out of the chamber. The man looked around, but the chamber, it seemed, was now truly empty. He strode forwards, towards the doorway the boy had been defending. Looking around once more, he grinned, before delving deeper into the cavern, and vanishing into the darkness.
Pebbles and small rocks clattered as the man's footsteps disturbed them from their resting places. They tumbled noisily down the slanted rock slope, causing more to become dislodged and tumble with them. They slid for some time before eventually emerging into another cave. The man, steadying himself with a hand on the damp roof, entered yet another chamber. It was bathed in a pale blue glow, emanating from a figure stood in the centre of the room. He stepped in quietly, avoiding the fallen rocks. The figure did not acknowledge his presence, continuing to either sleep, or purposefully ignore him.
"So." the man whispered, removing a device from his pocket "This is where you've been hiding".
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