team help

[omg_Bidoof]

k my team is:
Aerodactyl
Umbreon
Togekiss
Dusknoir/ electivire
breloom
and Metagross
i know i have an ice/water weakness but most of my team pokes have moves to shut them down

Aerodactyl@adamant
focus sash
abilityressure
evs-252 attack and speed
moves:rock slide
earthquake
aerial ace
stealth rock

Aerodactyl's duty is to set up stealth rock and then switch out or sweep if i think he can handle it.

Umbreon@Carefull
leftovers
Ability: synchronize
evs- 252 hp 156 spdef 96 def
Moves: wish
baton pass
toxic
mean look

has several functions:
1. a good wishpasser for aerodactyl so he can set up to sweep again.
2. a good wishpasser in general
3. toxic annoyer
4. mean looker

Sp. def wall

Togekiss@modest
Item unknown, plz suggest 1
Ability: serene grace
evs-252 speed/sp.def
Moves: air slash
nasty plot
flamethrower
aura sphere

i know what your thinking, why 252 evs in sp.def? well the anwer to that is so it can take a hit while it sets up nasty plot. after that it has high enough sp.attck with the modest nature to do a lot of damage. air slash for heracross and annoyance with the 60% chance of flinching flamethrower for grass types and aura sphere for steel types, and rock types like rhyperior. special sweeper

Electivire@adamant
item:expert belt
Ability: motor drive
evs 252 attack 252 speed
moves:ice punch
thunder punch
cross chop
earthquake

really good coverage, can switch into electric type moves to get the extra speed bonus. Sweeper

Breloom@jolly
item:toxic orb
Abilityoison heal
evs-252 speed/attack
moves: spore
focus punch
mach punch
seed bomb

idk why people dont use jolly brelooms. they beat other brelooms into the ground. i mean isnt the only purpose of a breloom to put the opponent to sleep? anyway my strategy here is to spore/focus punch. seed bomb for bulky waters, mach punch for weavile.

Metagross@adamant
item:??? plz help decide
evs 252 attack 127 speed 127 defence
moves: agility
meteor mash
bullet punch/zen headbutt
earthquake

after the agility it is a beast. i was thinking that he could be a tank and also serve as my defensive wall. idk though



I was also thinking of replacing someone on my team with:
Dusknoir@relaxed
item:leftovers
evs- 252 def/sp.def
pain split
earthquake
will-o-wisp
shadow sneak

no hp evs so he can pain split blissey and almost kill it.


Thank you for ur input. Plz sugggest items for the two that needed them and help me decide who i should boot: metagross, dusknoir, or electivire. im leaning towards dusk because metagross can be just as good of a defensive wall.

 

[SapphireL]

Oh... it's been too long since I've posted advice for competitive battles...

You seem to have too many physical-oriented Pokemon. Skarmory's able to wall a few of your Pokemon like Breloom, Metagross, and Aerodactyl.

Also, if you're wanting a Pokemon for Stealth Rock, you're better off with something more defensive. Aerodactyl has poor defenses, so she needs to attack as fast as possible. Give her Ice Fang over Stealth Rock, and you should consider Fire Fang over Aerial Ace. AA might be good for Hera, but that's just about it.

To prevent Skarmory from walling half of your team, you should have Electivire mix sweep. In that case, Thunderbolt > Thunder Punch, with a Lonely Nature.

In the case of Togekiss, Aura Sphere and Air Slash take out anything that Flamethrower could, and more.