Trenex

[startrekfan1195]

Before the world began... Before the Original One.... There was Trenex....

This is a sci fi themed Pokemon fanfic.
Prologue:



The sunlight was strong, pouring in from the window. Jeffrey awakened and opened his eyes, only to get them shut again by the bright sun. When he finally got up, he changed into his favourite clothes, which were a red T-shirt, and Blue Jeans. He looked in the mirror. He had black hair, fair skin, and was 5 foot 2 inches tall. It was his 10th birthday today!

After breakfast, he ran outside. Pallet town was cool today. He ran to Porfessor Oak's lab, and aksed for a starter pokemon. Prof. Oak gave him an Eevee, which turned out to be a shiny! Jeffrey was really happy, as everything seemed to be going well for him.

Until the Trenex struck....

I will be posting the first chapter in an hour or so.
thank you

 

[Zephyr Flare]

Well your first chapter is obviously not ready and this is not a Prologue. A prologue is an introduction, a set up for the story or hell it could be AFTER the events of the story it varies hugely. THe above however sounds like scraps of a chapter patched together and dubbed a prologue to get away with extreme shortness.

Also as stated in the Fanfiction Rules, IF a Prologue is short it is to be posted with the first chapter. The fact you're posting the chapter later suggests that you wanted to get it onto the forum (Thus likely written via reply box) so you wouldn't lose it. All computers come with programs such as Notepad/Wordpad which lets you save meaning you do not have to post until it is ready.


Please go read the Fanfiction Rules and Advice for Aspiring Authors and wait till your chapter is complete so these may be posted together and means no bumping the thread every few hours also. When it's all ready, repost your thread.