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Comic Progress Thread

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That Scary Clefairy

I <3 HK & BF
darken the lines, man! too sketchy and hard to see! You can do that!
 
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EmberGryphon

Meowth Fanatic <3
I don't have much to say, here- the guy on the bottom of the second page has very short legs; aside from that, no real crit. I'd agree with the above posted that some ink or just using a computer program to darken the lines might be good. ^_^

This post was really just to say yay, you're posting your comic again! I'd thought you'd given it up, since the comic section ignores all non-pokemon comics~
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Pffft; like I'd post it here. The comic's forum in this place isn't worth my time.
I'm posting this somewhere where it actually matters.
But thank you. I still have to line-art it, color it, shade it, all that hooplah.... it'll take some time.
But yeah; it's not being presented here. In short, Fan-Comics doesn't deserve me.
 
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SOS! Its Not Healthy..

He Say Whaaa...
Overall I really like it. I would suggest you to darken the lines and make it less sketchy as the other 2 mentioned. Shade it more and espcially the 4th one, its hard to tell what your trying to show. Thats all, but I really like the character designs you have though.
 
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