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Hi, I've just started battling online. I'm better and knowing things about pokemon than battling, but I've tried a little bit.

I have 2 teams atm.

Shedinja:
Focus sash
Endure
Trick Room
X-scissor
Shadow Claw

Ditto:
Shiny Powder
Transform

The idea of this pairing is simple. Get ditto to transform into shedinja. shedinja's moveset is OK, i haven't really had time to perfect it, but a BIG weakness i've found is that although ditto has wonderguard and 300HP, it has only 5 PP of each move.

Rampardos:
Muscle Band
Stone Edge
Earthquake
Zen Headbutt
Protect

Togekiss:
Leftovers
Aura Sphere
Air Slash
Roost
Protect

This pair are very slow, compared to most competetive teams anyway. with trick room hopefully still in play, they will provide enough firepower to do a lot of damage. Again there are a lot of problems that i still havent worked out.

Metagross:
Scope Lens
Recover
Explosion
Protect
Earthquake

Latios
Soul Dew
Luster Purge
Dragon Pulse
Protect
Refresh

Trick room at this point would be unadvisable because of latios' speed. In a sticky spot metagross would unleash Explosion, whilst latios would use protect. Again, this isnt very effective against ghost types.

My more recent team was created by accident. i had a random battle with a friend online and it work surprisingly well. please rate it.

Sceptile:
Heat Rock
Sunny Day
Solarbeam
Synthesis
Thunder Punch

Charizard:
Scope Lens
Sunny Day
Heat Wave
Focus Blast
Thunder Punch

These two are mainly staples. They help each other and set up sunny day, which helps both of them.

Garchomp:
Life Orb
Fire Fang
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Swords Dance

Roserade:
Big Root
Sunny Day
Giga Drain
Synthesis
Shadow Ball

This pair was slightly more tricky to get. garchomp is meant to be the muscle, whilst roserade is meant to keep alive by using synthesis and giga drain. Big root helps giga drain take more hp. i did think of using leech seed instead, but i didnt think it would be wise incase i went up against a normal type.

Gengar:
Expert Belt
Shadow ball
Focus Blast
Sludge Bomb
Energy Ball

Blissey:
Leftovers
Stealth Rock
Thunder Wave
Softboiled
Seismic Toss

Gener and blissey arent meant to be powerful..... more like annoying. blissey will keep healing itself, and will always do the same amount of damage to the opponent. gengar is designed to have a super effective hit one way or another. again i need to revise and change some of his attacks.

It would be VERY helpful to get some constructive criticism on this. Thanks
 
you will get responses if you read the crmt rules, learn more about competitive, then repost this.

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