First Sprites

[Foxy-Kun]

I'm a basic new spriter, and I want to know how I'm doing.
What should I improve on?

I have some recolors done:

1.

2.

And a single revamp, I know it's not great:

And my very first sprite, messing with Shaymin and Mightyena:

EDIT: I made a fusion!

And by request from combusken1994:

Stoned:

 

[Rikku]

I'm a basic new spriter, and I want to know how I'm doing.
What should I improve on?

I have some recolors done:

And a single revamp, I know it's not great:

And my very first sprite, messing with Shaymin and Mightyena:

all of them are nice except the salamence,the red is just too bright.

 

[Foxy-Kun]

Yeah, I thought about changing that, too. Thanks for the comment, and I remembered I made a Stone Dialga yesterday.

This one turned out bad, but all I have is MS paint, so...

 

[Rikku]

Yeah, I thought about changing that, too. Thanks for the comment, and I remembered I made a Stone Dialga yesterday.

This one turned out bad, but all I have is MS paint, so...

Do you use default paint colours?

 

[Foxy-Kun]

No, I think all colors are custom.
Maybe the red was only edited a small bit, or even made brighter. I'm fixing the red right now.

 

[Rikku]

No, I think all colors are custom.
Maybe the red was only edited a small bit, or even made brighter. I'm fixing the red right now.

yeah,you are supposed to use the custom one

ok,I will wait for it.

 

[Foxy-Kun]

Not a big change but...

 

[Rikku]

It looks almost the same to me....

Im thinking about this,what do you think:

 

[Tyran]

The Recolors are expert level ^^
Really good no default colors and u save as PNG!
Only the Revamp and the other thingy are not that good :/

U have a gift at recoloring use the force wel!

(Rofl)

 

[combusken1994]

Wow. This one is good The colours aren't too contrasty, and not too in my face. A good recolour indeed.

Hmm. I can tell you're a really good recolourer, as you can tell the skill that has been put into this, some noobier critics would say the colours look a bit too MS painty. I like it though.

I've seen this before. Or maybe it was another Mightyena / Shaymin mix. hmm, I know Mightyena has a lot of shades of coplours, believe me, but the green is a bit too, graded. Nice use of mix though. I would love to see just mightyena's head on Shaymin's bidy, it would look hilarious.

 

[Rikku]

Hmm. I can tell you're a really good recolourer, as you can tell the skill that has been put into this, some noobier critics would say the colours look a bit too MS painty. I like it though.

Are you referring tthe *noobier* to me?

 

[maxxa]

Yeah, I thought about changing that, too. Thanks for the comment, and I remembered I made a Stone Dialga yesterday.

This one turned out bad, but all I have is MS paint, so...

dont worry but mspaint doesnt really make it harder to sprite its what i use

 

[Foxy-Kun]

If I get at least 2 more sprites done, I will make my own sprite thread. This is just a first-time thread. Oh, and thanks for the comments.
Plus I added my new sprites to the first page:

 

[SilverFlame]

They are pretty good for your first, espesally the recolors, but I have to agree, the salemence is to bright.
Overall, 9/10