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Crobat
item: Black Sludge
nature: Timid
ability:inner focus
EVS
HP:0
Attack:152
Deffense:252
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:100
Moves
Move 1: cross poison
Move 2: U-turn
Move 3: taunt
Move 4: Hypnosis

Basically put them to sleep or try to poison them



Electrode
item: focus sash
nature:Bold
abbility: static
EVS
HP:0
Attack:200
Deffense:200
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:100
Moves
Move 1:Charge
Move 2: thunderbolt
Move 3: explosion
Move 4: torment

to cover the elctric weakness i did have

Clefable
item: sticky barb
nature: Bold
ability: magic guard
EVS
HP:252
Attack:0
Deffense:126
Special Attack:74
Speacial Defense:52
Speed:
Moves
Move 1:Water pulse
Move 2: psychic
Move 3: protect
Move 4:softboiled

Hariyama
item: wise glasses
nature:relaxed
ability:thick fat
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:252
Special Attack:
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1: stone edge
Move 2: focus punch
Move 3:fake out
Move 4: pay back

Slowking
item: leftovers
nature: brave
ability: own tempo
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:200
Special Attack:52
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:
Moves
Move 1: psychic
Move 2: protect
Move 3:earthquake
Move 4:ice punch


Weavile
item: focus sash
nature: timid
ability: pressure
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:252
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:punishment
Move 2: x-scissor
Move 3:fake out
Move 4:ice shard
 
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Can you give us the ev's instead of the stats.
And i see moves that are not good with the pokemon. Please read the guides on the forum or on www.smogon.com. This can really help you.
 
on topic:yea thsi needs a complete and total make over
off topic: i like your sig cause my name is Dean in reallife lol
 
lolol

not

dont post horrible teams as jokes its not funny

and if this is really your team then you should walk to gamestop hand them your d/p and tell them you want credit for mystery dungeon
 
Smeargle breaks standard rules, and is 2hko by anything that is halfway decent physical attacks. OHKO if spikes or stealth rock are set up.
 
that is the worst team ever
 
sparky trainer said:
that is the worst team ever
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you oviously havent seen my team then lol

just so you know he uses this team in our battles that are just for fun cause were not bothered about winning or loosing. however hes come here to make his fun team to be competitive and yet the only advice any of you have gave him is to check up on the rules.
So if your gunna comment on the team, atleast rate his team which the thread is about. Now thats out the way i can actualy rate.
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So smeargles not that good, you should replace him with something to cover your huge lightning weakness. Also make ur crobat your lead as they make amazing leads. On clefable id get rid of blizzard and dig, blizzard isnt that big of a deal but you may find a move with better accuracy better. Using dig then that gives people a free switch in to anything that flys or has levitate. On hariyama get rid of quick claw, im also not sure if you need fake out on there but if you find it helps then keep it.

I'm tired at the moment so i'll probably do a better rate later
 
^^^ dumb and dumber

whats to rate illagal sets, retarted natures, epic fail at understanding the difference between special and physical attacks not to mention horrible item and poke choice filled with moves no one would use that had ever heard of evs so i don't think he has and is just typing that down overall i rate this team

Epic Fail

there you happy
 
^^^ dumb and dumber

whats to rate illagal sets, retarted natures, epic fail at understanding the difference between special and physical attacks not to mention horrible item and poke choice filled with moves no one would use that had ever heard of evs so i don't think he has and is just typing that down overall i rate this team

Epic Fail

there you happy
 
For all those that are making fun of the newcomer thats not right. You guys were like that at one time, So you dumb*** stop making fun of him and tell him what needs to be done to his team. you messed up on the evs of most of your pokemon so you going have to rebreed, make weavile, and crobat physcial attackers and but the evs in att, not sp. att. but go to smogon and find better people to rate your team then people on serebii aren't that good at rating teams, and helping
 
okay i mainly post on smogon so don't pull that also i don't care if he's a newcomer before he posts he should read some and sit in the background until he knows a little
 
That still doesn't mean you should be mean to newcomers to the pokemon world. You shuld tell the mistake that is wrong with there team and be polite about. Not be laughing at the mistake they made. Were so to be teachers, not dicks
 
That still doesn't mean you should be mean to newcomers to the pokemon world. You shuld tell the mistake that is wrong with there team and be polite about. Not be laughing at the mistake they made. Were so to be teachers, not dicks
 
Hobo... said:
First up Smeargle
item: focuse sash
nature:hardy
abbility: own tempo
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:252
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:horn drill
Move 2:mindreader
Move 3:sheer cold
Move 4:roar of time

this set is illegal but if you want to run semargle try
smeargle@salac berry
timid
252 speed 252 hp 6 def
substitute
belly drum
spore
baton pass

Second Clefable
item: leftovers
nature:hardy
ability:magic guard
EVS
HP:252
Attack:0
Deffense:0
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:252
Moves
Move 1:blizzard
Move 2:follow me/ dig dependant on if its double battle or not
Move 3: protect
Move 4:softboiled
get rid of this and try bliss idk look on smogon i don't wanna right the whole thing here
Third Hariyama
item: quick clawthis is illegal
nature:hardy
ability:thick fat
EVS
HP:0
Attack:0
Deffense:252
Special Attack:252
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:substitute
Move 2:stone edge
Move 3:fake out
Move 4:mega kick
yeah this isn't that great of a poke and you gave it all spatk evs even though it doesn't have a special attack on it lol i give up
Fourth Slowking
item: leftovers
nature:hardy
abilityown tempo:
EVS
HP:0
Attack:0
Deffense:200
Special Attack:52
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:252
Moves
Move 1: psychic
Move 2: protect
Move 3:substitute
Move 4:ice punch

Fifth Crobat
item: Qualot berry
nature:hardy
ability:inner focus
EVS
HP:0
Attack:0
Deffense:252
Special Attack:252
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:cross poison
Move 2:sunny day
Move 3:whirl wind
Move 4:brave bird

Sixth Weavile
item: focus sash
nature:hardy
ability: pressure
EVS
HP:0
Attack:0
Deffense:252
Special Attack:252
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:dark pulse
Move 2:faint attack
Move 3:fake out
Move 4:iron tail
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i can't do this just remake the whole team but there's no way to just improve it
 
The rules state that before posting, you should have knowledge of competitive Pokemon. You don't.
 
thank you fell blade
 
thank you fell blade
 
fireson360 said:
That still doesn't mean you should be mean to newcomers to the pokemon world. You shuld tell the mistake that is wrong with there team and be polite about. Not be laughing at the mistake they made. Were so to be teachers, not dicks
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Asking for help requires doing the homework to get you to ask for advice. We're not here to hold someone's hand. If they can't help themselves by reading the stickies and understanding the very basics of competitive battling, there's no reason for any of us to help them.

You're right, we all were new at one point. The difference is you and the OP jumped to the NEW THREAD button without reading the stickies, whereas we read the stickies and thought before we posted.
 
Hobo... said:
First up Smeargle
item: Salac berry
nature:hardy
abbility: own tempo
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:252
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:0
Moves
Move 1:Endure
Move 2:Endeavor
Move 3:Extreame Speed
Move 4:Spore

You've never actually had a compedetive battle have you? 1-hit ko moves are usually banned and this set is horrible anyway. Someone can switch to a heracross or any other fighting type, while you use your 1-hit ko and it will miss because lock on is cancelled by switching, use close combat while you use lock on, and then finish you before you can attack. And roar of time is one of the worst moves in the game.

Second Clefable
item: leftovers
nature:hardy
ability:magic guard
EVS
HP:252
Attack:0
Deffense:0
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:252
Moves
Move 1:ice beam
Move 2:toxic
Move 3:protect
Move 4:wish

Third Hariyama
item: salac berry
nature:hardy
ability:thick fat
EVS
HP:0
Attack:252
Deffense:4
Special Attack:0
Speacial Defense:0
Speed:252
Moves
Move 1:substitute
Move 2:stone edge
Move 3:fake out
Move 4:reversal

Fourth Slowking
item: leftovers
nature:hardy
abilityown tempo:
EVS
HP:0
Attack:0
Deffense:200
Special Attack:52
Speacial Defense:252
Speed: 0
Moves
Move 1: psychic
Move 2: slack off
Move 3: calm mind
Move 4: ice beam

Fifth Crobat
item: Qualot berry
nature:hardy
ability:inner focus
EVS
HP: 0
Attack: 252
Deffense: 0
Special Attack: 0
Speacial Defense: 0
Speed: 252
Moves
Move 1: cross poison
Move 2: toxic
Move 3: hypnosis
Move 4: brave bird

Sixth Weavile
item: focus sash
nature:hardy
ability: pressure
EVS
HP: 0
Attack: 0
Deffense:252
Special Attack: 0
Speacial Defense: 0
Speed: 252
Moves
Move 1:ice punch
Move 2:pursuit
Move 3:fake out
Move 4:brick break
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Dude, you just epicly failed at making a team. Look onhttp://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ for better movesets and look around the compedetive battling form here at other peoples teams to get a good idea about how to make one. Corrections in Bold even though this team sucks with the corrections.
 
fireson360 said:
For all those that are making fun of the newcomer thats not right. You guys were like that at one time, So you dumb*** stop making fun of him and tell him what needs to be done to his team. you messed up on the evs of most of your pokemon so you going have to rebreed, make weavile, and crobat physcial attackers and but the evs in att, not sp. att. but go to smogon and find better people to rate your team then people on serebii aren't that good at rating teams, and helping
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No I wasn't. I didn't even try to make my team untill I had read lots of rmt's and I alwas use smogon for at least the basis of my movesets.
 
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