First team!

[masterleo]

this is a team of sweepers and the walls that make them work. ( I know it's boring and ou but it's my first team so cut me some slack)

item: Light Ball
140attack/252speed/116spattack
-T-bolt
-brick break
-grass knot
-HP-ice

yup, Light Ball pika. the thing has to swicth out half the time, but I still like it becuase the other half of the time it can pwn

252HP/52Def/204spDef
item: leftovers
-shadow sneak
-pain split
-WoW
-ice punch

my main wall, he takes switch-ins, burns things and sticks around awhile.

252HP/188attack/70Def
item:leftovers
-EQ
-Rapid spin
-ice shard
-SR

Physical wall, spiner and spiker.

HP4/252speed/252attack
item:leftovers
-focus punch
-sub
-leech seed
-sucker punch

sub-seed-punch-punch. that is all.

HP190/252Def/68spattack
item:leftovers
-protect
-surf
-toxic
-wish

standard vap, with toxic bukly waters aren't as much of a threat and protect can stall and recover.

HP4/252attack/252speed
item:choice band
-Flare blitz
-CC
-U-Turn/mach punch
-T-punch

CB abe, can't deside between U-Turn and mach punch

this team wins about 50% of the time so I must be doing something right!

 

[Meryl]

I don't think pikachu will be a very good lead. Especially against other faster and more effective leads.

Plus, you have a lot of weaknesses.
4 of your pokemon can fall to a MixMamoswine and 4 can fall to a boltbeaming Starmie. An offensive Froslass can kill at least 3 of your Pokemon as well and a Weavile too. I guess it's safe to say you are weak to a Hail team too.

If you want to stick to that Pikachu you have there, I suggest adding a Pokemon that can support it more, especially speed. Pikachu may be quick in UU, but if you're going standard, there are a whole bunch of Pokemon who can outrun your Pikachu and kill it in one blow.

 

[ashwin82]

Picture
Pokemon@Item
Nature(-stat+stat)
EV spread
-Move 1
-Move 2
-Move 3
-Move 4

 

[Reno]

Yeah, it is in a slightly incorrect format, but that is not the main problem.

One line descriptions are not helpful. I could post a SpecsMence and, even though it is standard, make an in-depth description about it.

Actually, I will. Here is what a description should look like.

Salamence @ Choice Specs
Modest (+SpA, -Atk)
4 HP/252 SpA/252 Spe
- Draco Meteor
- Dragon Pulse
- Hydro Pump
- Flamethrower

Ok, standard SpecsMence. Draco Meteor is an obvious; it is horrifically powerful at a whopping 210 base power after STAB. Common physical Salamence switch-ins will be destroyed by this, as it 2HKOs more or less all of the bulky Waters in the game. Dragon Pulse is a late game sweeping attacks, without the side effect of lowering Salamence's Special Attack. Hydro Pump is there for Heatran, who otherwise resists all of your attacks. Flamethrower gets a hit on the Steel types that like to switch in, such as Skarmory and Bronzong.

It really isn't that hard to put a little effort into the description. It makes the raters life easier and it makes your life easier.

Closed.