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Gray

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
One shot, random writing o.o'; inspired by the authors lounge place cuz um... o_O it was suppose to be a pokemonmorph oneshot, evolved out of that and now has nothing to do with it XD

woot...



Gray

Out of the dark and into the light.
The sun fades and the moon rises.
The moon fades and the sun rises.
The light.
The dark.

The middle of it all…
Between the light and between the dark…
There is.
Gray.

Two figures, silhouetted in the bright setting sun, looking like the devils shadows moved across the open field. One was smaller then the other, the first tall and broad shouldered. His steps smooth yet long, seeming to move almost like a snake, stealthy and quick while deadly and silent.

The second didn’t touch the ground at all, it floated. Almost two feet off the ground and the top of its body was near the taller one’s shoulders. The smaller being was shaped different then the tall one. While the taller one was thin and sleek, the smaller one was formed with animal like features, though with how the light hit them, there details could not be seen other then the outlines.

The smaller one was the first to speak, as it walked beside its companion.

“He did a good job on the sunset,” the feminine voice whispered, sounded that of a child, maybe a young girl of four, But while it spoke young it held something more, a soothing richness.

The taller figure slowed, seeming to turn its thin head towards the red fading orb, though many would think it would show the creature’s face. It seemed to just lose, soaking into the face and vanishing, a black hole of blackness, emptiness.

“He always does.” The voice was deep, booming and cross, seeming to shake the ground below its feet. The smaller creature did not seem effect by it, more so enchanted.

But the smaller figure said nothing as it looked away, the light hitting it just right and revealed the white skin, it was as if a new fallen snow had come and lay over the form. The legs looked that of a rabbit, the long limbs hanging down under the human like body. It was curved and looked much like a child. The face that of a human girl, though her ears were longer and pointed at the ends, she had no arms, not even stumps to where they should be. Her shoulders were smooth and did not exist really and would never be able to support arms if she had them. Her eyes held no pupils, held nothing but the whites, giving her a supernatural look.

Silver hair sprouted from her head and ran down her back freely; it was twice as long as her body and at first was almost mistaken for a tail. She stood merely three feet compared to her seven foot partner.

Her partner still looked like it was being shadowed, the details of its form hidden in the black nothingness that was it.

The strange flouting child seemed to glow almost, her form was naked, no clothing was worthy of the strange deity. She spoke once more, her voice rich of the innocents it held.

“I was given the task of creating life,” She declared her empty eyes looking up at the other figure in search of approval from it.

“You are life. That is your duty,” The deep voice replied, seeming to be almost amused by the strange child known as Life.

Life gave a frustrating face, as she seemed to have forgotten the reason she was made. But instead decided to just carry on the conversation she had started.

“I made something special. Something I have never made before.” She chimed out flouting out in front of the black being. The silhouette slowed and finally stopped, two black limbs lifted up from its sides, one holding what looked to be a staff, but it was just as black and detail-less as it. It placed the staff before it resting what must be arms on top of it.

“Every creature you have ever made, Life, has been unique. For that is how you work.” His booming voice seemed to chuckle as the child like being stuck out her silver tongue and flouted down landing her rabbit like feet on the ground. She looked like a deformed girl, with feet of a rabbit and no harms. Her hair flowed down over her chest and behind her back giving her the look of a wild beast.

“This is different, Death, very different!” she declared, startling the being now known as death. She turned and took in a deep breath before releasing a high pitched whistle. A small cry came from the distance and a sparkling form dashed across the darkening sky. It left behind it a streak of pink as it came straight for Life.

Death froze a second, watching closely. The being was unsure of what the innocent life had created, and he was used to cleaning up after her. The pink form that came slowed and stopped hovering above the ground.

“Mew?” the voice gave, sounding overly sweet and innocent, which of course reminded Death of Life. The strange flouting creature had round kangaroo like feet, or perhaps rabbit. Looked as if it would never be able to really walk on the feet as well, seeming to rely on its ability to fly to move. Its body looked much like a rodents, built small and rounded with small stubby mouse like arms. On top of the creature’s head was two little cat like ears, pointed and twitching. But what was odd was that this creature had something neither Death nor Life had, eyes. Blue eyes. Innocent blue orbs that seemed to just look right through Death.

And for the first time, Death shivered. Something in those eyes told him that Life had done something powerful, more powerful then he.

“… What… is it?” Death asked calmly.

“It is… a life bringer. Like me, doesn’t have the same abilities of me but… it can create life! I wanted to see what would happen if something that would live on the planet that we created would do if it could populate it.” Life smiled as she walked closer to the ‘mew’ and they touched noises, the creature giving off a loud “Mew!” as this happened.

“I do not know if Balance will want this, Life.” Death warned, his deep tone showing concern for his companion. Life wrinkled her nose at him as she thought about this.

“… well, perhaps you should make something then?” she asked, “Something to counter my new life bringer, as Balance wants everything to have equality to it.”

Death was silent as Life spoke about this, if he had a face it would be that of skepticism, or a raised eyebrow. He let out a deep sigh as he shook his black head.

“Nay, Life. I do not give, I take… that is why you create and I destroy.” He replied with almost no tone in his voice, both Life and her pink creation’s ears dropped. Seconds passed before Death realized what they were trying to do. Life had done this to him before. Even though she had no pupils, she somehow pulled off a sort of puppy dog look. Her lower lip quivered as she looked up at him like a child about to cry.

But while Death could resist this look, not when it was coming at him by another, the pink creature did have eyes; the blue spheres stared up at him with the expression of a hurt child. He stared a moment back at the two and finally had to turn his gaze away.

“I will balance it out, but only this once, Life. Do not ask me to go against my laws again.” He raised his staff, ignoring the cheers coming from the two beings as he lifted it high up into the air, the sun seemed to have just set as darkness took over.

The deep voice of Death grew even deeper, like a drum and louder as the top of his staff began to shake. A shadow seemed to ooze from the top of it, looking like living goop as it jiggled and shook before falling to the ground.

“When there is one who brings life, there will always be one taking it. When the worlds become corrupted with war, there is one who brings peace, when a world can no longer handle its load, no longer can continue its purpose. Death will ease it into a painless sleep… For one can not be with out the other!” slowly the ooze shook and expanded before withdrawing into itself and a form began to shape, the round body came before four limbs sprouted from the lower body. The end of it expanded into a long string before it broke and made three flat pieces of darkness. The head formed with a long dog like snout, two sharp fangs came down as thick black fur sprouted like grass starting from the tip of the black nose to the end of the three flat tails.

Yellow eyes snapped open as a deep growl escaped it. The creature had no ears but long saber tooth fangs that were half as long as its legs. Almost fox like at first, standing knee high most men. Its three tails slapped the ground as the creature looked up at the pink figure flouting about.

Life and Death fell silent as the two looked at each other, the pink life bringer came forward and its blue eyes looked into the black creatures golden. Seconds ticked by before finally the life bringer let out a loud “MEW!” and patted its new ‘friend’ on the head.

Death let out a deep booming chuckle as Life seemed confused.

“Is it done? They will balance this earth out?” Life asked.

“We are no longer needed, little sister, for we have created… our children.” Death replied, “I don’t think Balance will be pleased.”

“… Is he ever?” laughed Life as she flouted up to face Death in the face. If Death had a mouth he would be smiling.

“It is done then, shall we?” Death turned and began to walk, his form starting to fade away. Life began to follow him her form turning clearer as she went. She looked up at Death before looking back seeing that the two new beings they had created were… playing with each other. Batting at each other and darting about like two new kittens.

When Life looked back she saw that Death was gone, the child like being looked back at there ‘children’

“Mew and… Onen” and with that, Life too vanished from this plain of existence.



The two mini versions of life and death soon parted after there play, Mew traveling the world and spreading the life she was giving. She soon gained the name ‘mother of pokemon’ and Onen stuck the shadows, called death bringer and demon. But he did not mind, he did his duty taking life when it was there time to go and still remained close friends with Mew.

But the earth was still not balanced…

To Death and Life came once more and brought along there elder brother, balance and he created a new kind, one both Mew and Onen could effect but were not apart of…

Man…

And the pokemon world… began.
 

IceKing

Sexorific!
Hey Lady Myuu! Man, I'm reviewing a lot of your stuff XD

The second didn’t touch the ground at all, it floated.

While the taller one was thin and sleek the smaller one was formed with animal like features, though with how the light hit them there details could not be seen other then the outlines.

Lots of commas belong in this sentence

“He did a good job on the sun set.” the feminine voice whispered, sounded that of a child, maybe a young girl of four, But while it spoke young it held something more, a soothing richness.

Sunset is one word I believe, comma at end of dialogue, uncapitilzie but. Did you proofread this 0_0?

Her shoulders were smooth and did not exist really and would never be able to support arms if she had them.
Her eyes held no pupils, held nothing but the whites, giving her a supernatural look.

Fix the paragraphing. BTW, I loved that description

“I was given the task of creating life.” She declared her empty eyes looking up at the other figure in search of approval from it.

“You are life. That is your duty.” The deep voice replied, seeming to be almost amused by the strange child known as Life.

Again, with the dialogue errors. Comma at end!

The being was unsure of what the innocent life had created, and he was used to cleaning up after her.

But what was odd was that this creature had something neither Death nor Life had, eyes, and blue eyes at that.

Its probably better to put a period after the first eyes and then say Blue eyes.

Life had done this to him before. Even though she had no pupils, she somehow pulled off a sort of puppy dog look. Her lower lip quivered as she looked up at him like a child about to cry.

Other than the grammar mistakes, it was quite a funny sentence



Overall, I really liked this one shot and I thought it was definetely very interesting and definetely caught my attention. But please fix the grammatical errors! There were quite a few! And why did you make up this pokemon called Onen when I'm sure there was another pokemon you coudl have used? I liked the descriptions of these strange beasts, for soem reason I pictured them wearing trenchcoats and kept thinking of the Trix Rabbit when thinking of Life XD I also loved the way you reffered the Balance as the supreme creator. I also loved how you described Man being the breaker of balance. Overall this was a pretty darn good one shot. But again, FIX THE GRAMMAR MISTAKES!
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
nope, I did not proof read :p cuz um, I am laaaaaazy...

<< >> I was just saying I wasn't going to get any reviews I thought and Ren was like YOU GOT ONE and I was all omg..

anyway...

<< >> you know, half those errors are ones I should have caught sooner o_O thats what I get for writing with out really looking. *fear multitasking*

thanks for the review.
 
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