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T

The Monarch

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being a new member of this forum, i hereby seek your audience in order to rate my first ever revamp:

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do not show any mercy in your comments. i'd like honest opinions about my abilities as a pixel-by-pixel ms paint user.
 
Hmm. That is really quite good.

To improve:
Put black outlines on the shaded areas of the legs (But don't over do it.)
The shading on the body is a bit to much in a straight line, curve it a little
Maybe redo the eyes... Somethings wrong with them

Don't stop making them.

And you don't need to take in such a posh manor (unless you really want you). This isn't buckingham palace, far from it.
 
That is SOOO Good! I wouldn't change the eye because it's the same as the original
 
greetings. this is my second piece of work.

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the flame at the tail was impossible to revamp unless i create the flame pattern from scratch. thus the look of this flame tail.

the bit of fire came from the emerald version of the sprite to cover the imperfect mouth as it is beyond my capabilities to replicate the mouth properly.

the head flame came from the ruby/sapphire version since the fire red/leaf green version didn't have any outline to distinguish it from the white background, which makes it look weird.

i know i still need work on the shading part. keep practicing the shading i suppose. i really don't have much artistic talent so you probably won't see me doing any pixel-overs and scratches in the near future.

edit: i originally wanted to revamp a moltres when i started. but the complexity of moltres's colouring baffled me.
 
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