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[GarchompHata]

It be GarchompHata 'gain. This time i have a Wifi team for you guys. i slacked off a bit when it came to IVs, but if it needed to be good, it was good. Iworked fairly hard choosing my team members. I do not have Pt, so no tutor moves. Remember Hypnosis has 70% still. This is for OU. now the team.

Crobat @ Wide Lens
Jolly 252 Spe / 160 Atk / 92 Hp

~ Hypnosis
~ Roost
~ U-Turn
~ Aerial Ace

What a fantastic lead. with a 77% Hypnosis, and 393 speed (30 IV), he disables most other leads, suicide or offensive. Taunt stops stuff when I deem Hypnosis a little too risky, as my team has a large SR weak. Aerial Ace 2HKOs Infernape, which rocks. U-Turn to get the hell out of there to a counter. WILL NOT REPLACE. Unless you have a really cool lead.

Heracross @ Salac Berry
Adamant 252 Spe / 252 Spe / 4 Def

~ Substitute
~ Swords Dance
~ Close Combat
~ Megahorn(y)

This thing is a beast. After 1 SD, if you don't resist it, and aren't named Hippodown, you die. After 2 SDs, even if you do resist it, it stings. After 3 SDs, gg. Double STAB is probably the best choice of attacks.

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
Modest 248 Spe / 252 SpA / 8 Def

~ Overheat
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Thunderbolt
~ Focus Blast

As you see, I like speed, set up, and power. This is the former and latter. Hits 396 speed. I don't like to waste evs, and with Bullet Punch Scizor being what it is, 4 extra evs can help, because Magmortar resists steel. Focus Blast for a filler, as her movepool sucks. TDBolt can take down a once-DDd Gyara, Starmie, and is just good coverage. Overheat to pound holes into the opponents team early. I might go Flamethrower for late game, but 85% is pretty good, and the power difference is big. Help, please.

Salamence @ Life Orb
Modest 252 Spa / 136 Spe / 120 Atk

~ Draco Meteor
~ Dragon Pulse
~ Flamethrower
~ Brick Break

In this I opted for power. DM tears holes in early game. Dragon Pulse late. Hydro Pump is for Heatran, which my spread allows me to out speed, even if it's Timid, without a scarf of course. Flamethrower is great for KOing steels other than Tran. Edit: Mixmence rocks.

Starmie @ Choice Specs
Timid / Modest 252 Spa / 252 Spe

~ Thunderbolt
~ Surf / Hydro Pump
~ Ice Beam
~ Grass Knot

Provides awesome coverage. Everyone's Stars are spinning, or Tricking, but mine is all-out offense. I really need help with Timid / Modest. With Modest I get nuclear bomb-like power and airplane-like speed. With Timid I get power on the atomic level of bombs, but my speed is like Apollo 11. Hydro Pump is like firing a missile into a random place, whilst Surf has a set target.

Forretress @ Leftovers
Impish 252 Hp / 196 Atk / 96 Def

~ Spikes
~ Stealth Rock
~ Explosion
~ Rapid Spin

I apparently needed a Spinner, so here he is. Sets up entry hazards of my own, and EXPLODES when finished.

Hope you like it! Rate, steal, and enjoy!

 

[Viva la Vida]

very solid, but with Hypnosis' (Crobat) new low accuracy in Platinum and on Shoddy, it won't always hit what you want. Don't have time to rate fully, but consider that one suggestion

 

[GarchompHata]

It's for D/P Wifi. I have a question. If I use Diamond, and they use Platinum, what is Hypnosis' accuracy, 60 or 70?

 

[Frost Nova]

Four pokemon weak to Stealth Rock and no Spinner.

DOES NOT COMPUTE.

 

[GarchompHata]

Four pokemon weak to Stealth Rock and no Spinner.

DOES NOT COMPUTE.

Base 130 Pokemon with Taunt and Hypnosis

SYSTEMS UP AND RUNNING.

 

[Rad3n]

Smeargle should always max HP before any defences. It's not like it matters though, as long as you get four subs.

 

[xgina]

Base 130 Pokemon with Taunt and Hypnosis

SYSTEMS UP AND RUNNING.

because, of course, it's not like stealth rock always gets set up turn 1, and you're always going to put their SRer to sleep, and if you don't you will always be able to predict their switchin and switch crobat in in the nick of time

 

[Rad3n]

because, of course, it's not like stealth rock always gets set up turn 1, and you're always going to put their SRer to sleep, and if you don't you will always be able to predict their switchin and switch crobat in in the nick of time

[whisper]I think it became fairly apparent that he isn't going to listen. Just give him other advice and maybe suggest a spinner over something else without mentioning that it can spin...[/whisper]

 

[GarchompHata]

Hey, I will take advice, but so far no one has suggested one. Remember, this is for wifi, so if you could suggest a spinner, thanks. I may not be able to test it for a while while I breed it though. Any good spinners I could use over say Smeargle? And by the way, I have gotten zero help in seven posts.

 

[Rad3n]

I'm going to suggest the following:

~Replace Swellow with a Guts Machamp / Heracross due to reliability. Swellow dies too quickly and doesn't pack a punch in OU. Being SR weak, Toxic Orb abusing and Brave Bird using means it's only good as a lead.

~Replace Umbreon with Suicune as it outclasses it in terms of phasing, attacking and resisting. Umbreon is also too predictable. If you want you could even run a Crocune over Umbreon as you lack a Status absorber.

~Consider HP Ice or Grass over Focus Blast. This is the first team I've seen without an Ice move ever. Suicune would also do well with Ice beam. Maybe:

Suicune @ Leftovers
Modest / Timid - Pressure
4 HP /252 SpA / 252 Spe (I cbb thinking of Evs
~Calm Mind
~Roar / Hidden Power Electric
~Ice Beam
~Surf / Hidden Power Electric

Fire is the most devastating type in all of OU play. It is also one of the most vulnerable. Play it safe when playing with fire. Flamethrower > Fireblast.

~Salamence's Evs are bad. Jump points achieve nothing. The Speed'll probably do you better in the long run. You should run Timid and 252 Spe evs in order to Tie with Zapdos, Celebi and Jirachi.

~I would replace Smeargle with a spinner as it really has nothing to pass for. Starmie is an option if you didn't opt for Suicune. Forry and Donphan are good choices on this team also...

 

[Viva la Vida]

It be GarchompHata 'gain. This time i have a Wifi team for you guys. i slacked off a bit when it came to IVs, but if it needed to be good, it was good. i worked fairly hard choosing my team members. I do not have Pt, so no tutor moves. Remember Hypnosis has 70% still. This is for OU. now the team.

Crobat @ Wide Lens
Jolly 252 Spe / 160 Atk / 92 Hp

~ Hypnosis (even if this is for DP wifi, Hypnosis just isn't reliable
~ Taunt
~ U-Turn
~ Aerial Ace

What a fantastic lead. with a 77% Hypnosis, and 393 speed (30 IV), he disables most other leads, suicide or offensive. Taunt stops stuff when I deem Hypnosis a little too risky, as my team has a large SR weak. Aerial Ace 2HKOs Infernape, which rocks. U-Turn to get the hell out of there to a counter. WILL NOT REPLACE. Unless you have a really cool lead.

Okay, but If you are looking for another flyer for a lead, I suggest Togekiss with T-Wave. I have seen leads like that at work, and they are complete awesomness. Ask me for details if intrested.

Machamp@Life Orb/Leftovers
Adamant 252 Hp, 252 Atk, 6 Spe, No Guard
Cross Chop/ Dynamcpunch
Stone Edge/Ice Punch
Rest
Sleep Talk

I see what you want to achieve with swellow, but try this guy instead; The power he wields is overwhelming. I have nearly lost matches to these things. Plus, With a Belly Drum boost, He is uber powerful

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
Modest 248 Spe / 252 SpA / 8 Def

~ Overheat
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Thunderbolt
~ Focus Blast

As you see, I like speed, set up, and power. This is the former and latter. Hits 396 speed. I don't like to waste evs, and with Bullet Punch Scizor being what it is, 4 extra evs can help, because Magmortar resists steel. Focus Blast for a filler, as her movepool sucks. TDBolt can take down a once-DDd Gyara, Starmie, and is just good coverage. Overheat to pound holes into the opponents team early. I might go Flamethrower for late game, but 85% is pretty good, and the power difference is big. Help, please.

I like him, he's different.

Salamence @ Life Orb
Modest 252 Spa / 136 Spe / 116 Atk

~ Draco Meteor
~ Brick Break
~ Flamethrower/Hydro Pump
~ Roost

You already have Magmortar as a Special Sweeper, so you can at least make this guy mixed. In fact, I would ditch this guy for a spinner (You can't avoid Stealth Rock Forever

Umbreon @ Leftovers
Careful 252 Hp / 92 spD/ 164 Spe

~ Wish
~ Yawn
~ Protect
~ Pursuit

This thing is amazing. Yawn forces my opponent to sleep or switch, and either way I get a Curse/Wish. Pursuit hits 'em hard as they switch. Pretty straightforward. Need help with the evs, though.

Here are the evs from smogon. over than that, it is fine.

Smeargle @ Salac Berry
Jolly 252 Spe / 252 Def / 4 SpDef

~ Spore
~ Belly Drum
~ Baton Pass
~ Substitute

I only have good things to say about Smeargle. Come in after something dies to something slow. Spore. Sub. Belly Drum. Pass. It's that easy! After a Drum and a Salac passed to it, Swellow rocks. The end

Great!!!

Hope you like it! Rate, steal, and enjoy!

Changes in bold

 

[cloudk]

Mence wants to be mixed so you can have a easier time breaking walls. IMO umbreon and smeargle are redundant. Umbreon curses up to be bulky and powers up its attacks. Ironically its only attack is pursuit. Any smart opponent would send in a status absorber, so they won't switch out and pusuit, with STAB factored in, will have a pitiful 60 base power which hurts nothing.

Smeargle passes boosts to swellow but swellow switch out extremely often due to it being walled by rocks and steels, losing its boosts in the process. Passing drum onto swellow just to have to switch out on turn 2 is a waste of time.

So to summarize, replace smeargle and umbreon because they're both redundant IMO. Get a spinner and possibly a status absorber like machamp. Speaking of machamp, it hits all your pokemon for SE dmg and is fairly bulky, allowing it to take several hits and rest off the damage, and then rip a hole in your team again.

 

[Master Marc Spirt]

Use a physical salamence.
Salamence@Life orb
EVs 252ATK 252Speed 4 HP
Nature-Adamant
Moves;
Earthquake-for fire and electric types
Dragon claw-to get a stab hit
Crunch-for ghost types
Dragon dance-to power up your pokemon's speed and atk

You should use this because it hits harder than a Special sweeper Salamence.

 

[cloudk]

Use a physical salamence.
Salamence@Life orb
EVs 252ATK 252Speed 4 HP
Nature-Adamant
Moves;
Earthquake
Dragon claw
Crunch
Dragon dance

Here in RMT, giving a moveset to a person without telling him why he should use it is pretty much spam since he's just using it because you told him to.
I'd say mixmence would serve better for him seeing how he has to switch between swellow and magmortar to break walls currently. With mixmence however, that problem is solved.

 

[Gren Draco]

It be GarchompHata 'gain. This time i have a Wifi team for you guys. i slacked off a bit when it came to IVs, but if it needed to be good, it was good. i worked fairly hard choosing my team members. I do not have Pt, so no tutor moves. Remember Hypnosis has 70% still. This is for OU. now the team.

Crobat @ Wide Lens
Jolly 252 Spe / 160 Atk / 92 Hp

~ Hypnosis
~ Taunt
~ U-Turn
~ Aerial Ace

Yeah it's great at stopping suicide leads, and what about things that use SR midgame? you're screwed, but yeah it is a good lead, not sure about max speed though =/

Swellow @ Toxic Orb
Jolly 252 Spe / 252 Atk / 4 Def

~ Brave Bird
~ Facade
~ Quick Attack
~ U-Turn

GutsHeracross over this use the Flameorb/SwordsDance set, since you said you like set up sweepers and you currently lack one, not to mention it's superior as a sweeper

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
Modest 248 Spe / 252 SpA / 8 Def

~ Overheat
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Thunderbolt
~ Focus Blast

Nice, but i'd get rid of focusblast for HPice/grass

Salamence @ Choice Specs
Modest 252 Spa / 136 Spe / 116 Def

~ Draco Meteor
~ Hydro Pump
~ Flamethrower
~ Dragon Pulse

i've tried those speed ev's on my Wall breaker set, and that never works =/
and that's a WALL breaker, you're screwed trying to do it with a sweeper, use timid as well since Specs gives you the power

Umbreon @ Leftovers
Careful 252 Hp / ? / ?

~ Wish
~ Yawn
~ Protect
~ Pursuit

umbreon doesn't work ime it's an inferior suicune as has been said here already, don't use crocune though since you've sort of got a status absorber in heracross, especially if it gets burnt by the orb

Smeargle @ Salac Berry
Jolly 252 Spe / 252 Def / 4 SpDef

~ Spore
~ Belly Drum
~ Baton Pass
~ Substitute

Get rid of it for a rapid spinner, preferably physically inclined, like forretress or donphan, not starmie though if you use suicune

Hope you like it! Rate, steal, and enjoy!

Hope i helped

 

[GarchompHata]

Use a physical salamence.
Salamence@Life orb
EVs 252ATK 252Speed 4 HP
Nature-Adamant
Moves;
Earthquake-for fire and electric types
Dragon claw-to get a stab hit
Crunch-for ghost types
Dragon dance-to power up your pokemon's speed and atk

You should use this because it hits harder than a Special sweeper Salamence.

No? I will try to find access to a platinum tutor to get some Outrage for my Sala, and make it an LO Mixed version.

I will, however, try a MoP Cross over Swellow. It'll take a while.

Forry will spin for me over Smeargle. He'll set up Spikes, SR, and spin. and asplode.

Starmie is a go as a special sweeper. Ill update the OP.

Thanks for all your help!

 

[EmpoleonStaraptorStarch]

It be GarchompHata 'gain. This time i have a Wifi team for you guys. i slacked off a bit when it came to IVs, but if it needed to be good, it was good. Iworked fairly hard choosing my team members. I do not have Pt, so no tutor moves. Remember Hypnosis has 70% still. This is for OU. now the team.

Crobat @ Wide Lens
Jolly 252 Spe / 160 Atk / 92 Hp

~ Hypnosis
~ Taunt
~ U-Turn
~ Aerial Ace

What a fantastic lead. with a 77% Hypnosis, and 393 speed (30 IV), he disables most other leads, suicide or offensive. Taunt stops stuff when I deem Hypnosis a little too risky, as my team has a large SR weak. Aerial Ace 2HKOs Infernape, which rocks. U-Turn to get the hell out of there to a counter. WILL NOT REPLACE. Unless you have a really cool lead.

Good, solid lead.

Heracross @ Salac Berry
Adamant 252 Spe / 252 Spe / 4 Def

~ Substitute
~ Swords Dance
~ Close Combat
~ PURSUIT. Read explanation below

This thing is a beast. After 1 SD, if you don't resist it, and aren't named Hippodown, you die. After 2 SDs, even if you do resist it, it stings. After 3 SDs, gg. Double STAB is probably the best choice of attacks.

Double STAB? Heh heh heh... So there's this thing called Gengar... I mean really. Megahorn is for Celebi and that's all? A SD'd Pursuit really ****s it up too, doesn't matter if it switches out or not. I'd go CC + Pursuit. Then Gengar won't stop you, and Celebi isn't really a problem (HP Fire Celebi's over wi-fi are DANG rare). Plus you can block subseed/status with Substitute. Megahorn really gives you lousy coverage for this type of set (as flying resists them both, and Close Combat already takes care of Darks with the addition to Steels, Rocks, and Ice. Megahorn grabs what, Psychics and Grass? How many psychics that aren't also part steel do you see in OU? Azelf. And Pursuit ****s that up more because it stops it from switching. PURSUIT ALL THE WAY. It also covers a lot of more OU threats and offers better type-coverage.

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
RASH 248 Spe / 252 SpA / 8 Def

~ Overheat
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Thunderbolt
~ Focus PUNCH--You rape Heatran this way. NOTHING can safely switch into you. Not Heatran. Not Blissey. That's about the only two things you have to worry about with this last slot Anything steel with higher defense is ripped by your otther attacks. Oh yeah, Rash in this case.

As you see, I like speed, set up, and power. This is the former and latter. Hits 396 speed. I don't like to waste evs, and with Bullet Punch Scizor being what it is, 4 extra evs can help, because Magmortar resists steel. Focus Blast for a filler, as her movepool sucks. TDBolt can take down a once-DDd Gyara, Starmie, and is just good coverage. Overheat to pound holes into the opponents team early. I might go Flamethrower for late game, but 85% is pretty good, and the power difference is big. Help, please. TBH you already have a badass fire move, so I'd go Flamethrower. It's not like you'd Fire Blast a Scizor when you have Overheat anyways, right? Choice users are meant to switch, and that means Overheat's Sp.Att drop won't really matter...

Salamence @ Life Orb
Modest 252 Spa / 136 Spe / 120 Atk

~ Draco Meteor
~ Roost
~ Flamethrower
~ Outrage

In this I opted for power. DM tears holes in early game. Dragon Pulse late. Hydro Pump is for Heatran, which my spread allows me to out speed, even if it's Timid, without a scarf of course. Flamethrower is great for KOing steels other than Tran. 116 Def is filler EVs, but help me come in on Cross CCs and Megahorns, along with other resisted physical attack. I pumped in a few extra speed EVs to hit a jump point.

WTF... Fee Fi Fo Fum. Heatran comes and chomps you like gum. Bad rhyme. Anyway... Heatran kills this. Draco Meteor, Outrage, Flamethrower, THEN Roost? When would you EVER use that? You'd want to switch out because of confusion or your Special Attack drop.... You'd never really want to use it to stay in quite frankly... Even Smogoning this would be better than it's current state.

Starmie @ Choice Specs
Timid / Modest 252 Spa / 252 Spe

~ Thunderbolt
~ Hydro Pump--I just like this more
~ Ice Beam
~ Grass Knot

Provides awesome coverage. Everyone's Stars are spinning, or Tricking, but mine is all-out offense. I really need help with Timid / Modest. With Modest I get nuclear bomb-like power and airplane-like speed. With Timid I get power on the atomic level of bombs, but my speed is like Apollo 11. Hydro Pump is like firing a missile into a random place, whilst Surf has a set target.

Forretress @ Leftovers
Impish 252 Hp / 196 Atk / 96 Def

~ Spikes
~ Stealth Rock
~ Explosion
~ Rapid Spin

I apparently needed a Spinner, so here he is. Sets up entry hazards of my own, and EXPLODES when finished.

Hope you like it! Rate, steal, and enjoy!

Changes in bold. Simple synopsis:

TBH SkarmBliss even could rape you before, but now Focus Punch on Magmortar deals with that. Salamence... That just failed... I'd try one with Life Orb, Draco Meteor, Dragon Claw, Earthquake, and Fire Fang if I were you. Max Attack and Speed (possibly a bit of Sp.Att investment but I don't...) and you still do one heck of a lot with DM. Starmie, Hydro Pump.

Good luck ^_^

 

[Blaze55584]

It be GarchompHata 'gain. This time i have a Wifi team for you guys. i slacked off a bit when it came to IVs, but if it needed to be good, it was good. Iworked fairly hard choosing my team members. I do not have Pt, so no tutor moves. Remember Hypnosis has 70% still. This is for OU. now the team.

Crobat @ Wide Lens
Jolly 252 Spe / 160 Atk / 92 Hp

~ Hypnosis
~ Taunt
~ U-Turn
~ Aerial Ace

What a fantastic lead. with a 77% Hypnosis, and 393 speed (30 IV), he disables most other leads, suicide or offensive. Taunt stops stuff when I deem Hypnosis a little too risky, as my team has a large SR weak. Aerial Ace 2HKOs Infernape, which rocks. U-Turn to get the hell out of there to a counter. WILL NOT REPLACE. Unless you have a really cool lead.

Good lead i actully really like this crobat. There are alot of leads that can counter him tho ( suicune ice beam, Azelf psychic ect..) But they probely arnt faster than this crobat

Heracross @ Salac Berry
Adamant 252 Spe / 252 Spe / 4 Def

~ Substitute
~ Swords Dance
~ Close Combat
~ Megahorn(y)

This thing is a beast. After 1 SD, if you don't resist it, and aren't named Hippodown, you die. After 2 SDs, even if you do resist it, it stings. After 3 SDs, gg. Double STAB is probably the best choice of attacks.

Fine, i dont know much about heracrosses although it seems it can counter most things.

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
Modest 248 Spe / 252 SpA / 8 Def

~ Overheat
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Thunderbolt
~ Focus Blast

As you see, I like speed, set up, and power. This is the former and latter. Hits 396 speed. I don't like to waste evs, and with Bullet Punch Scizor being what it is, 4 extra evs can help, because Magmortar resists steel. Focus Blast for a filler, as her movepool sucks. TDBolt can take down a once-DDd Gyara, Starmie, and is just good coverage. Overheat to pound holes into the opponents team early. I might go Flamethrower for late game, but 85% is pretty good, and the power difference is big. Help, please.

Also magmortor should have flamethorwer not fire blast. Alothough fire blast is stronger and has an ok acuracy i'd still go with flamethower.[/U]

Salamence @ Life Orb
Modest 252 Spa / 136 Spe / 120 Atk

~ Draco Meteor
~ Roost
~ Flamethrower
~ Outrage

In this I opted for power. DM tears holes in early game. Dragon Pulse late. Hydro Pump is for Heatran, which my spread allows me to out speed, even if it's Timid, without a scarf of course. Flamethrower is great for KOing steels other than Tran. 116 Def is filler EVs, but help me come in on Cross CCs and Megahorns, along with other resisted physical attack. I pumped in a few extra speed EVs to hit a jump point.

U should'nt put flamethrower on your salamence you've got a perfectly good magmortor to use fire type attacks.

Starmie @ Choice Specs
Timid / Modest 252 Spa / 252 Spe

~ Thunderbolt
~ Surf / Hydro Pump
~ Ice Beam
~ Grass Knot

Provides awesome coverage. Everyone's Stars are spinning, or Tricking, but mine is all-out offense. I really need help with Timid / Modest. With Modest I get nuclear bomb-like power and airplane-like speed. With Timid I get power on the atomic level of bombs, but my speed is like Apollo 11. Hydro Pump is like firing a missile into a random place, whilst Surf has a set target.

Forretress @ Leftovers
Impish 252 Hp / 196 Atk / 96 Def

~ Spikes
~ Stealth Rock
~ Explosion
~ Rapid Spin

I apparently needed a Spinner, so here he is. Sets up entry hazards of my own, and EXPLODES when finished.

Hope you like it! Rate, steal, and enjoy!

Your smergle was fine and not every team needs a spinner you could of just had a pokemon that sets up stealth rock

 

[cloudk]

Your smergle was fine and not every team needs a spinner you could of just had a pokemon that sets up stealth rock

Half his team is weak to SR and you're telling him not to get a spinner?

 

[EmpoleonStaraptorStarch]

And you'd insult him for that BECAUSE OH MY ****ING GOSH, HE DIDN'T EDIT HIS TEAM TO HAVE A SPINNER YET! You're just trying to prove you're "better" than other people at battling. Think about using SR to your ADVANTAGE, huh? I do it, and it works beautifully. Plus why the **** does ScarfMortar or Crobat care about Stealth Rocks? They're frail, fast, and they do their jobs in less than 5 switches

You're really just another average battler picking on noobies (or people who appear to be noobies with actual insight )

Think before you speak for crying out loud...