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ItryzToo

NeoRox

Stingrazor02
Rate + Fix pleazz! this is my 2nd team so i dont really know if this is a good set.. also look at the team as a whole and not as individuals, thnx

Mamoswine @ Chesto Berry
Adamant, ATK 252 SPE 252 - Oblivious

Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stone Edge
Rest

Salamence @ Leftovers
Bold, DEF 252 SPE 252 - Intimidate

Roost
Draco Meteor
Flamethrower
Earthquake

Gliscor @ Leftovers
Jolly, ATK 252 SPE 252 - Hyper Cutter

Ice Fang
Thunder Fang
U-turn
Earthquake

Zapdos @ Leftovers
Timid, HP 252 160 SPD 96 SPE - Pressure

Roost
Toxic
Thunderbolt
Substitute

Heatran @ Choice Scarf
Timid, SPA 252 SPE 252 - Flash Fire

Earth Power
Fire Blast
Stealth Rock
Explode

Suicune @ Leftovers
Bold, HP 252 DEF 252 - Pressure

Ice Beam
Surf
Mirror Coat
Reflect
 
For your 2nd ever team, its not a bad attempt. Let me try and help you fix some things up.

Mamoswine @ Chesto Berry
Adamant, ATK 252 SPE 252 - Oblivious

Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stone Edge
Rest

If you are posting Mamoswine first because you are going to be lead with it, don't. Mamoswine doesnt make a great lead. It is a good attempt at something non-standard, but after the first chesto berry is used, then rest becomes pretty much useless as you wont have the bulkyness to take 3 more hits while you wait to wake up.

From the EV Spread, it looks like you want a sweeping Mamoswine, I would recomend changing Rest for Ice Fang and throwing a Choice Band on this mamoswine. Mamoswine also does not need 252 Speed EV's. 192 Speed EV's is enough to outspeed main threats and you can then dump the final 64HP EV's into HP.

If you are looking for a status absorber and want to stick with rest, I would suggest using the Rest-Talk set:

Mamosine@Leftovers
Snow Cloak
Adamant
124 HP / 252 Atk / 64 Def / 68 SpD
~ Earthquake
~ Ice Shard / Avalanche
~ Rest
~ Sleep Talk

Salamence @ Leftovers
Bold, DEF 252 SPE 252 - Intimidate

Roost
Draco Meteor
Flamethrower
Earthquake

You shouldnt really use this salamence as a physical wall since you have a number of other Pokemon which will work much better than Salamence. I would recomend turning him into a sweeper.

Salamence @ Life Orb / Leftovers / Yache Berry
Intimidate
Adamant
120 HP / 252 Atk / 136 Spe
~ Outrage / Dragon Claw
~ Earthquake
~ Fire Blast
~ Dragon Dance

Outrage is really the ultimate salamence attack for late game sweeps and works excellent with Life Orb and after a single dragon dance it can terrorise teams. Dragon Claw works better if you want to have more control over your Pokemon. Earthquake provides nice coverage along with Fire Blast which will help you hit Physical Walls that might try and wall you such as Forretress and Skamory. it also lets you beats Scizor.

Gliscor @ Leftovers
Jolly, ATK 252 SPE 252 - Hyper Cutter

Ice Fang
Thunder Fang
U-turn
Earthquake

You should make Gliscor more bulky and the Pokemon to provide Stealth Rock support.

Use this EV Spread: 252 HP / 12 Atk / 28 Def / 218 Spe. It provides enough speed to outrun adamant lucario and lets you OHKO it with Earthquake. It also gives your Gliscor much more bulky to let it take hits.

For the moveset I would go for:

Earthquake
Ice Fang
Roost
Stealth Rock

Earthquake and Ice give you excellent coverage. Earthquake also gives you STAB damage. Roost is there to recover off lost damage and Stealth Rock to provide your team with the rocks. Either Ability works but maybe Sand Veil would work slightly more in your favour as sandstorm is very common.

Zapdos @ Leftovers
Timid, HP 252 160 SPD 96 SPE - Pressure

Roost
Toxic
Thunderbolt
Substitute

This set works fine. If you can get Baton Pass for a Zapdos, then you could consider that to pass Substitutes. Hidden Power [GRASS] could also provide somewhat useful to beat Swampert and hit ground types that will resist thunderbolt. Your team could struggle against some forms of Swampert as you lack a real counter but you can wear it down with Suicune, or explode with Heatran if its providing to be a real nuisance.

Heatran @ Choice Scarf
Timid, SPA 252 SPE 252 - Flash Fire

Earth Power
Fire Blast
Stealth Rock
Explode

Looks pretty strong. You can drop Stealth Rock if you give stealth rock to gliscor. This will make room for another attack. Hidden Power [ICE] will provide the best coverage. If you cannot get Hidden Power [ICE] then Dragon Pulse is the next best thing. Beware that Dragon Pulse cannot OHKO Dragonite even with Stealth Rock support and you only have a % Chance to OHKO Salamence after Stealth Rock damage. Dragon Pulse will help beat Kingdra better than Hidden Power [ICE] however.

You have 6 EV's spare, Slap them onto HP. that one extra point could be vital.

Suicune @ Leftovers
Bold, HP 252 DEF 252 - Pressure

Ice Beam
Surf
Mirror Coat
Reflect

Use the final 6 EV's and put them into Special Attack. At a glance, Gyarados could become a huge problem if you let it Dragon Dance. Suicune can counter it very well as long as you have got Hidden Power [Electr]. I would suggest giving it Hidden Power [Electr] to tackle Gyarados and so you can hit other bulky waters that might try to come in and wall you. I would also use Calm Mind somewhere in there too if I was you so you can calm mind up against non-threatening Pokemon and then start to sweep. Suicune really doesnt need Mirror Coat, so you can drop this for Calm Mind. I would then drop Reflect for Hidden Power [Electr]. You also have quite alot of Ice attacks throughout your team, and you will have even more-so if you take any of my advice so it could be an option to drop Ice Beam and you could give it roar to stop baton passer and just to shuffle your teams Pokemon around while damageing them through Stealth Rocks.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

You have done a pretty good job with team, although it might be standard, it has promise. You need to fix some of the sets and spreads up like I mentioned. Once you have improved the sets and spreads, yo can then start to look at the main threats that would threaten your team and then work to tackle the MAIN threats. You shouldnt look to tackle alot a little threats as then your team will create gaps and could become weak to big threats.
 
I tried rating your entire team, but it would have been too great an effort for me to make it work without switching too many of your Pokémon out. Basically, you built this team without any regards to having a good lead to counter common leads and without any regard to teamwork. You have 2 SR-weak Pokémon and no SR resists, but no Spinner or Taunter. You have Earthquake on Salamence with a -Atk nature. It's a nightmare.

I hate giving this advice, but you need to lurk a little more and see why the popular Pokémon are being used and HOW they are being used before slapping a team together. It takes a little more to put a team together than just taking 6 OUs and creating your own movesets for them that may not work because you didn't think it through. I'm not saying go to Smogon and crib them word for word, but if you're going to make your own movesets (which is something I endorse), do it smart. This is not done smart. Sorry.
 
thnx all =D even tho im not good at getting the right HiddenPower =(

and ultimo i only did my first match yesterday lol with this team:

Special Sweeper

Modest Gengar @ Choice Specs
Levitate
EV: hp 4 – spe 252 – spA 252
Trick
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
Thunderbolt

Sweeper
Adamant Heracross @ Choice Band
Guts/Swarm
EV: hp 4 – atk 252 – spe 252
Megahorn
Stone Edge
Close Combat
Pursuit

Offensive
Adamant Gyarados @ Life Orb
Intimidate
EV: hp 4 – atk 252 – spe 252
Waterfall
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Stone Edge (Ice Beam or –Fang)

Spiker
Impish Skarmory @ Leftovers
Keen Eye
EV: hp 252 – def 252 – spe 4
Roost
Spikes
Whirlwind
Drill Peck


Physical Wall
Impish Hippowdon @ Leftovers
Sand Stream
EV: hp 252 – def 252 – spD 4
Earthquake
Slack Off
Stealth Rock
Roar

Special Wall
Bold Blissey @ Leftovers
Natural Cure
EV: hp 252 – def 252 – spD 4
Charm
Flamethrower
Lightscreen
Soft Boiled

But instead of using standard teams i wanted to make my own.. even tho that turned out pritty bad xD
 
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