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encerchris

Epic Spriter
hello! ;006;
i have made an nice sprite but i want feedback
his name is Ge-Amidos
;006; ----EDIT---15/04/12---;006;
made some changes to the sprite:
- New wings
- Some more of mismagius in the sprite
- Redone the tale by scratch
for some reason i can't delete the old image and can't upload a new one...
 

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Your fusion looks good. There is only visible error IMO: the shadow under Giratina's thing behind its neck (i don't know how it's called) is missing (just copy it from the original sprite). Also -hmmmm- I don't see where you used the ghost one other than for the color.

Although, your fusion is very very simple. I think you should make more complicate fusion: take more risks. From what I can see with this fusion, I think you can handle it.
 
I suppose this is okay, but I would not call it epic. This is only one sprite, you need too show more examples if ya;ll want too be called epic.

It's good you are fusing some "Easy" pokemon- most people try to cram as many in too try too make it too impressive. But I feel you haven't really added enough of Mismagius. Apart from the recolor, there isn't much of her. I would try to have incorporated the jewel on her chest onto the head, or the chest of the splice. The wing of the final splice needs a lot of work- the one we can see the most is just "put" there- there's not attachment on the side, nor has it been recolored. It's best too stick too recoloring 1 pokemon, then splicing it with the one you want, as if you take 3 pokemon with completely different color schemes, it can get messy. Also, the back wing on the splice is a bit iffy- it looks funny as you cannot see it properly because of Girantinas head. I would suggest actually doing the wing yourself by hand- it's easy to copy the style of sprites that pokemon are done in. The middle stripes of the spilces look wrongly shaded as well- tbh, they don;t really do anything for the sprite, imo, I would get rid of them. I also think you could easily put Girantinas legs on the splice, and edit Salamances tail to suit it's height. Otherwise, it's okay, the shading is alright, and it's nice too see more Mismagius being used n_n*.
 
It's a wonderful exemple of what a beginner's fusion should look like. Nothing more, nothing less.
The idea is great, recoloring the result with a mixed color scheme (Mismagius/Salamence) was a bold move and paid off. You could've implemented more Mismagius elements, like Electricbluewolf suggested, although I don't really agree with her C&C 100%. She (?) is right about the wings being a bit weird (you should really try to scratch the back one) but I think the white stripes look really good, tbh.

That said, it's not epic. It's got that "I could have done that"-feel, and it should have a "How did he come up with that?"-feel. I'm not really into all the "your sprites should be super technical and 100% scratch" hipster crap either, but this one really is a bit too easy to be called epic. It's still a nice job though.
 
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