If you want feedback you shouldn't be making an entire thread asking for it. Be sure to have a look at the stickied threads and a few others in the Café, as some might be a big help - for instance if you do a search for a thread where people talked about the sort of fics they like to read.
Also, as Falthor pointed out, there's a Reviewer thread where members will post saying that they'll drop comments for certain fics. PM someone who looks like they mgiht be willing to have a look at your fic and politely ask them if they're read your and give some advice before you rewrite it.
But honestly, you should relax: your fic wasn't posted that long ago, so it's normal not to get many replies. Patience is the key, but if you really want a review, like I said, PM someone who might be willing to help you out - maybe even a Mentor in the Beta House thread if you sign up.
If you look around the Café, you'll see that there's help all around you. ^^
~Psychic