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Ditto123

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Hey guys. This is my first OU team for BW, so give criticism. I need help with ev's, so can somebody suggest any? Give my crit for anything on my team, thanks! Also, this is an Unova only team, except for one exception, my star. This is the first time I'm going competitive, so bare with me.

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At a glance
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Up Close
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Mienshao@Life Orb
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: ???
Nature: ???
-Fake Out
-Hi Jump Kick
-Stone Edge
-U-Turn

First up is a lead. I need to have a lead, or this team would suck. Not to sure on Mienshao, but she works pretty well. The speed and attack are actually pretty good. She'll Fake Out for free damage. Some say it's cheap. I don't care. I'm pretty sure that Mienshao outspeeds many leads, but is still outsped by the like of Aerodactyl and such. The move synergy gets a lot of types for at least neutral damage. Some people question the use of Aura Sphere. When people see Mienshao, they go to their Physical walls, as she is famous for her physical moves. Then I smack them with an Aura Sphere.


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Alomomola@Leftovers
Ability: Healer
EVs: 252 HP, ???
Nature: ???
-Wish
-Protect
-Scald
-Light Screen

Alomomola is the healing goddess. The medic of this team. Sort of like a lesser Blissey. She has great HP already, and with 252 HP EVs, it's beastly. In this gen, how much Wish heals your pokemon depends on the users total HP. And Alomomola has great HP to go around. For example, I have a pokemon with 600 total HP. I use Wish. The Pokemon that receives Wish gains 300 HP. And that's nothing to laugh at. The pokemon that gets the Wish from Alomomola will receive a lot of HP. It halves the total amount of the user's HP, but that's still a lot. Protect is to stall with Wish/Leftovers. Light Screen to help the next Pokemon a little bit. Scald for the 30% chance of burn.


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Lilligant@4 HP, 252 SpA, 252 Spe
Ability: Own Tempo
EVs:???
Nature: Modest/Timid
-Quiver Dance
-Petal Dance
-Leech Seed/Energy Ball
-Toxic

Pretty self explanatory. This pokemon is amazing in battle. Great stats, a bit fragile, but still an amazing sweeper. Quiver Dance powers up so many stats. Special Attack, Special Defence, and Speed. Those original stats on this pokemon is nothing to laugh at either. Petal Dance and Energy Ball benefit from that Special Attack boost. Leech Seed and Toxic stall and they are great. But the best thing about this pokemon is her ability. Own Tempo. I Quiver Dance up, then Petal Dance. BUT, her ability prevents her from being confused! And being confused is one of the only downsides of Petal Dance, so this is a great choice. Petal Dance is amazing so this is almost certain to get KOs.


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Krookodile@Persim Berry
Ability: Moxie
EVs: 4 HP, 252 Att, 252 Spd
Nature: Jolly
-Crunch
-Earthquake
-Outrage
-Pursuit

Again, self explanatory. This thing can sweep. Krookodile has amazing speed and attack power. How many times have I swept with this thing alone? And it's not the star. This thing will murder anything weak to it, which is actually a lot of types. Then it'll take Moxie boost. Moxie will keep powering me up until I get sky high attack. I can anything with a couple of Moxies up. Crunch, Earthquake, and Outrage are just too beastly to pass up. And I get a free Outrage with a Persim Berry. Pursuit hits those fleeing Ghost or Psychic types. He has great type coverage and typing.


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Confagrigus@???
Ability: Mummy
EVs:
Nature: ???
-Night Shade
-Mean Look
-???
-???

I'm not sure about his moves except for Mean Look. This dude is not meant to kill. I also do not want to set up much. I cannot afford killing the opponent. He is used for two things only. Mummy and Mean Look. He switches in to a physical attacker to hand over the Mummy. Then I Mean Look. Either that Pokemon kills me off, or I switch. Mummy is essential for the next member. Without Confagrigus, this falls apart, so he plays a huge role in this team. Mummy is absolutely an amazing ability for this next Pokemon. Confagrigus' ability is the bomb.


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Slaking@Flame Orb
Ability: Truant
EVs: 4 HP, 252 Att, 252 Spe
Nature: Jolly/Adamant
-Facade
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide
-Slack Off

My star. The possiblities are endless with this. He learns such a variety of moves, it's not funny. Most of those moves are insanely powerful. Let me say this. Confagrigus passes on the Mummy. Than Slaking gets it. Sweep. Oh yea. He should be in Ubers, except for the ability Truant and I got rid of it. Pretty amazing. Facade+Flame Orb+STAB=AMAZING! Earthquake and Rock Slide for QuakeEdge combo. Slack Off to make this so frickin annoying to others.



Saying goodbyes
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Well, hope you like my team. Give suggestions and crit.
What I need suggestions for:
-Nicknames
-Moves
-Nature
-Ability
-Possibly a new lead
Thanks for reading!​
 
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You should probably expand your explanations before a mod gets you. It's in the rules I think.
 
Won't the flame orb reduce the damage slaking does if im not mistaken maybe you should switch to a toxic orb
 
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Cofagrigus should get 252 EVs in both defenses. Give it Destiny Bond and HP Bug for Darks.
Mienshao is kind of awkward. I'm not too sure about Aura Sphere. You have Lilligant to take down Ground and Rock tanks.
I guess Alomomola can take Healer.
 
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Mienshao@Life Orb
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Att / 252 Spe / 4 whatever
Nature: Jolly
-Fake Out
-Hi Jump Kick
-Stone Edge-
U-Turn
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Bold. sorry to lazy to rate the rest of the pokes right now

Cofagrigus should get 252 EVs in both defenses.

no it shouldnt, u need to max out its HP EV's first
 
Fa7e, got it. But for Cofagrigus, bare in mind that he's not killing anybody
 
Fa7e, got it. But for Cofagrigus, bare in mind that he's not killing anybody

HP is not meant for killing -_-
hes got like base 50 HP or something, that should be the first thing to max out. as for one of the empty slots i would use will-o-wisp
 
I wasn't talking to you.

I was watching a wifi match on Youtube and came across a great set that I might use on my team.

Honchcrow@???
Ability: Overconfidence
EVs: 252 Att, 252 Spe, 4 Def
Nature: Jolly
-Substitute
-Brave bird
-Drill Peck
-Sucker Punch
 
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