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mangaeyes

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I drew this with my new tablet on MS Paint (I'm getting photoshop soon!)

Tell me what you think and how I can improve them

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Cubone.png


jynx.png


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I don't think your allowed to bump your message unless you are putting more artwork up and its been like a day since it has happened.

any ways the Treecho, his head looks alright but his body looks a little fat, his lefts look a little skinny and also a little to short. Everything else on him looks alright.

Cubone looks alright but the arm that is holding the bone looks a little small and doesn't seem to look right.

and the others well the last one looks like it needs a lot of work but, everyone starts from somewhere
 
Love the way you draw Jynx, you got a unique style there.

Treecko looks good, but Cubone's a bit too fat.
 
Frozir said:
Love the way you draw Jynx, you got a unique style there.

Treecko looks good, but Cubone's a bit too fat.
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Thanx Jynx is my favourite Pokemon. I also thought Cubone looked a bit too fat...I think its because I tried to make it look like its running-I'll try a simpler pose later.
 
I tried to draw a ***** guy but it came out kinda...well just look below to see....

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Things you're doing right: You have a relatively basic grip on anatomy. You seem to understand what perspective is. Always a good thing.

Things you need work on: Proper figure size (should be 7 to 8 heads tall), learning how to make a definitive light source, and seeing your drawings in "three dimensions" so you can accurately place shading and highlights. Hands, when the fingers are splayed, should cover the facial area in terms of proportion. Noses aren't just two little lines, but you can worry about that when your technique becomes more defined.
BUY A SCANNER. Draw things out, then scan them. MSPaint sucks to high heavens unless you really know what you're doing.
 
Yeah I find hands hard to draw using my tablet and I really struggle with shading...it was my target in art at school as well. I thought that was how ***** noses were supposed to be...can you show me an example of how they can look?
 
Really sorry that you can't see much of this one my scanner adds LOADS of light so everyhting looks like its been bleached...
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This is one is a lot clearer....
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Tell me what you think and how I can improve.
 
MUCH cleaner. This looks loads better.
Also, bit of advice on women; they have an hourglass shape; hips should be as wide as the shoulders, and vice versa.
Otherwise, a lot of improving is going on. Take it further.
 
Again, I love your art, adore it even. It's not like the best I've ever seen or any of that crud, but it's wonderful in its uniqueness, I don't post on threads unless I hate or love them, But I really liked this one,
 
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