Spiteful Murkrow
Early Game Encounter
Hi everyone, it’s been another year, and I fell for the contest bug again with Thousand Roads' 2026 Professional Interest One-Shot Contest. I didn’t do quite as well this year thanks to my entry not sticking the landing with integrating the target theme, but given how all the judge feedback had nothing but positive things to say about the underlying narrative, I figured that it was about time to tighten things up and throw it out there in a bit of a different and less one-shotty format. As those of you who followed said contest results or else looked at the thread icon likely surmised, this fic is a story about Miraidon.
No, not the Miraidon you went on your journey around Paldea with. The other one.
Now, there were a few assumptions that were made as part of the intended reading experience for this story. First and foremost is that this is a companion story for my more musical Violet not-quite-a-novelization, Trueno. While the average chapter lengths between the two are about the same, this story is written in a very different style and is significantly less upbeat and cheery for reasons related to major backstory events in Scarlet / Violet, even if the content in the end I felt still fit within a PG rating. While the two stories do share a common set of assumptions for event chronology and the depictions of its characters, they are both intentionally written to be enjoyable as standalone works without needing to know anything about the other. Additionally, due to the inherent nature of this story’s viewpoint character, there’s unmarked spoilers for the Pokémon Scarlet / Violet campaign… well, in this very preamble, really. So if you care about those, take that as a sign to come back sometime after seeing the credits roll in those games.
Beyond that, there’s a few flourishes that you’ll likely noticebecause I couldn’t help myself if you’ve read a few of my other stories. One of them is that there is Spanish-language dialogue present in various chapters of this story, which is how this story chose to render the human characters’ dialogue as heard from across a language barrier. Unlike some of my other stories, there were no hovertext translations provided for them as a very deliberate meta choice to capture the same degree of understanding that the viewpoint character has, with translations provided in author’s commentaries at each chapter. Said sections also include some explanations for some computer-related jargon that comes up in this story, which come up to sell the sense of being in the head of a robot anole but otherwise might fly over the heads of some readers.
As a “third wheel” to another “third wheel” story, this story runs on a publishing schedule of “whenever I have the time and personal motivation for it”, even if the majority of this story was originally aiming to be uploaded as part of a twice-a-week schedule. At the time of this post, there were 14 chapters that had been planned for this story. It wouldn’t be particularly hard to pick things up and keep going after that point, but that’s a bridge to be crossed when I get there. Just don’t be too shocked if this story flips back to ‘In-Progress’ sometime after a stretch of being ‘Completed’.
I would like to take a moment to extend my special thanks to @Venia Silente and Eric566 from AO3, who beta-read this story and provided the Spanish-language lines and their translations. I would also like to thank @Dragonfree along with Flyg0n from FFN and Wolflyn from AO3 for the feedback they provided as contest judges, which helped shape the final release of this story. For the curious, as has become a bit of a tradition of mine, an archival version of the story as-submitted to the Professional Interest contest will be uploaded to AO3 after the final version catches up with it in full.
Though that’s enough talking for now, let’s take you below the mists of the Great Crater of Paldea, through the eyes of the Guardian of Paradise that watches over it.
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No, not the Miraidon you went on your journey around Paldea with. The other one.
Now, there were a few assumptions that were made as part of the intended reading experience for this story. First and foremost is that this is a companion story for my more musical Violet not-quite-a-novelization, Trueno. While the average chapter lengths between the two are about the same, this story is written in a very different style and is significantly less upbeat and cheery for reasons related to major backstory events in Scarlet / Violet, even if the content in the end I felt still fit within a PG rating. While the two stories do share a common set of assumptions for event chronology and the depictions of its characters, they are both intentionally written to be enjoyable as standalone works without needing to know anything about the other. Additionally, due to the inherent nature of this story’s viewpoint character, there’s unmarked spoilers for the Pokémon Scarlet / Violet campaign… well, in this very preamble, really. So if you care about those, take that as a sign to come back sometime after seeing the credits roll in those games.
Beyond that, there’s a few flourishes that you’ll likely notice
As a “third wheel” to another “third wheel” story, this story runs on a publishing schedule of “whenever I have the time and personal motivation for it”, even if the majority of this story was originally aiming to be uploaded as part of a twice-a-week schedule. At the time of this post, there were 14 chapters that had been planned for this story. It wouldn’t be particularly hard to pick things up and keep going after that point, but that’s a bridge to be crossed when I get there. Just don’t be too shocked if this story flips back to ‘In-Progress’ sometime after a stretch of being ‘Completed’.
I would like to take a moment to extend my special thanks to @Venia Silente and Eric566 from AO3, who beta-read this story and provided the Spanish-language lines and their translations. I would also like to thank @Dragonfree along with Flyg0n from FFN and Wolflyn from AO3 for the feedback they provided as contest judges, which helped shape the final release of this story. For the curious, as has become a bit of a tradition of mine, an archival version of the story as-submitted to the Professional Interest contest will be uploaded to AO3 after the final version catches up with it in full.
Though that’s enough talking for now, let’s take you below the mists of the Great Crater of Paldea, through the eyes of the Guardian of Paradise that watches over it.
Rayo
Your old friend used to call you ‘Miraidon’. You used to help him build his dreams, until that fateful battle which ruined everything and left you watching over your lab all alone. Sometimes, you revisit your past, wondering about the future that could’ve been.
This is the story of a time you reviewed those memories of how you became your lab’s sole remaining Guardian of Paradise.
Your old friend used to call you ‘Miraidon’. You used to help him build his dreams, until that fateful battle which ruined everything and left you watching over your lab all alone. Sometimes, you revisit your past, wondering about the future that could’ve been.
This is the story of a time you reviewed those memories of how you became your lab’s sole remaining Guardian of Paradise.
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