~Sprites~

[Light_Lugia]

Welcome to where all my new sprites are posted. I would like C&C, as much as possble. I want to make really good sprites.(for a 10-year old) Well, without more chat, here are my newest sprites!
~Revamps~

(i know, i know, the outline is too bright. Who cares?)
~Fakemon~

Dracice, my best fakemon. Ice/Dragon

Mmm . . .Grass/Dragon.
~Other~

Some dragon eye made in Paint+Paint shop Pro
That's it. C&C​

 

[PokeJosh]

On Ice Dragon, there is not enough black outline towards the darker areas. Also, there is no black outline on the dragons eye picture. The grass/Dragon is the best one of all of them, in my opinion.

 

[~Lucario Master~]

Looks pretty good, everything. But the shading on all 3 Dragon Fakemon Tail's bother me. And on Pikachu, the ears looked messed up on the outlines. They appear to be all bumpy and sticking out.

 

[Luna Megami]

Your Dracice sprite is amazing! The coloring and shading is so nice and vivid. Keep up the great work! <3

 

[Light_Lugia]

On Ice Dragon, there is not enough black outline towards the darker areas. Also, there is no black outline on the dragons eye picture. The grass/Dragon is the best one of all of them, in my opinion.

SIZE="1"]Ice dargon: Ok . . . i'l fix it when i can, ok? Dragon eye: It's not ment to have any . . . .[[/SIZE]

Looks pretty good, everything. But the shading on all 3 Dragon Fakemon Tail's bother me. And on Pikachu, the ears looked messed up on the outlines. They appear to be all bumpy and sticking out.

Grass Dragon: Yeah, i know, but how can i fix it? Pikachu: I know . . . but i don't know why it's like that.

Your Dracice sprite is amazing! The coloring and shading is so nice and vivid. Keep up the great work! <3

Thanks.
Now for a new mix:

C&C please.

 

[.Person.]

Verry colorfull and well shaded. If I may say, they are to well shaded. The legs on the third one don't mach and the pikachu is great!

 

[Mex]

You must work at outlines.
;194;

 

[TiagoGR]

The shading is great, but the outline could be better. Also, the leaves on the Grass/Dragon are copy-pastey.

 

[Light_Lugia]

The shading is great, but the outline could be better. Also, the leaves on the Grass/Dragon are copy-pastey.

How can the outline be better? C&P, i know!

You must work at outlines.
;194;

Like i said, HOW? Come on people, you're not telling me how i can get better.
C&C, please.

 

[BlazikenGurl]

They're good, but as said before the wings on the grass dragon are copy and pastey, and the reason why you need to work on outlines is because they seem too light. The Pikachu's right ear (our left) looks bumpy at one point; try to fix that. Your an excellent spriter, that's for sure! ^____^

 

[-aocom v2-]

Concerning color choice: your palettes seem to be very bright, especially the green on the grass dragon. I'd recommend decreasing the saturation of shades as you move to darker coloring.

Concerning shading: The tails (on the dragons) look quite pillow shaded. On your outlines, I'd strongly recommend adding black, or a close-to-black-without-actually-being-black color. The outlines aren't dark enough methinks.

On the back sprite for your dragon, you don't have to make the spikes that pointy. It makes the outlines look really sharp, and you could easily pull off the effect with 'softer' spikes (if soft spikes existed o-0;; )

You're ten? Quite good, I must say...

 

[Avenger Of All Pokesouls]

you have horribly pillow shaded your sprites. You use to many shades so it looks unnatural. Also, some of your lightsources are very inconsistent. You should also avoid using existing poke's parts in fakemon.

 

[.Person.]

How can the outline be better? C&P, i know!



Like i said, HOW? Come on people, you're not telling me how i can get better.
C&C, please.

You kinds drew the lighter shade to much at the bace of the wing. Maby thinner or a closer shade.