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The Celestial Sprite Thread

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Celestial_Aura

Key of Destiny
I've been thinking about it and yeah I'm gonna make a sprite thread. So heres some stuff that I want some comments on so yeah here it goes.

Here's my first ever map that I made!
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I tried making these 3 regi fakes so here's Regiblaze, Regispark, and Regiwood!
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My first try at a quick attack.
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A couple of gym leader revamps.
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A fusion I made for my first contest.
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Another fusion continueing that contest.
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A fused a gold and silver Alakazam and Kabutops.
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A revamped Porygon 2 backsprite.
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Another fusion for another contest.
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A devamped Infernape fused with a gold version Alakazam.
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A devamped Marowak backsprite.
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And a fusion fakemon.
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So what do you think?
 
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The lineless looks kinda wrong i think you used to much of the same color on the outline
the reggi looks more like a fly crash or something try to add a more solid body the shading seems fine to me
The quick attack scould probably have more space beetwen each sprite
last the lucario seems angry but it looks fine to me exept that
 
Hmmm... Not that bad, but the lineless could use improvement. also, don't forget that the Statues have 7 "Eyes" (I'm still looking for in what language regi means seven
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Remember, Regice isnt frozen rock, and registeel isn't metallic rock. so your regis shouldnt be fire rock, or static rock. like both of the regis,( who are ice and steel) you should have balls of fire and electricity connected together for the regifakes.
 
True, you should make them out of just fire/electricity... by the way, I like the new pose of Regiblaze! Looks more... firm. like the real statues!
 
My favorite is the Treeko quick attack. It is simple yet unique. The sign of a true simpleyetuniquer.

P.S. simpleyetuniquer isn't a word...
 
I like the new starter more! By the way, the new statues are looking better, but try to make them more... Humanshape. Yes, I'm saying you have to make Fire and electricity humanshape... try to make it more like... different parts conected than a amphmorus blob... However, good job!
 
Again! all im seeing is a rock with fire, and a rock thats electrucuted! they need to be humanshape, like the guy with the umbreon avi said. instead of new regis, they look like blobs.


To try and help you, get out a pen and pencil. Draw a stick figure or a human, and then put balls of fire and electricity togeter on the body. try to make every joint. even the space between them. that will be your model. after all of the editing, if they dont look like humans of fire and electricity, then work on them some more.

peace
 
Brando95 said:
Torcheddy?
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Oh my..!!! See I told you I'm horrible at making names!
Kindrindra said:
I like the new starter more! By the way, the new statues are looking better, but try to make them more... Humanshape. Yes, I'm saying you have to make Fire and electricity humanshape... try to make it more like... different parts conected than a amphmorus blob... However, good job!
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I think I got the idea now. Thanks Kindrindra!
 
Again! all im seeing is a rock with fire, and a rock thats electrucuted! they need to be humanshape, like the guy with the umbreon avi said. instead of new regis, they look like blobs.


To try and help you, get out a pen and pencil. Draw a stick figure or a human, and then put balls of fire and electricity togeter on the body. try to make every joint. even the space between them. that will be your model. after all of the editing, if they dont look like humans of fire and electricity, then work on them some more.

peace
 
Again! all im seeing is a rock with fire, and a rock thats electrucuted! they need to be humanshape, like the guy with the umbreon avi said, instead of new regis, they look like blobs.


To try and help you, get out a pen and pencil. Draw a stick figure or a human, and then put balls of fire and electricity together on the body. try to make every joint. even the space between them. that will be your model. after all of the editing, if they dont look like humans of fire and electricity, then work on them some more.

peace
 
Umm...these need some more C+C.
The map ~ you squeezed waaaayyy too much on that tiny spit of an island, but that is minor. They don't have to be filled mile to mile with cities.
The regi ~ Messy, just a bit messy. Could have had those signature odd dots on each one.
The trainer thing ~ The face and hair looks good. But the stance is rather stiff, the legs should be a little spread apart, more natural.
Quick attack ~ The line is a little long, but not bad.
Lucario ~ Looks great. Small, but good.
The fire staters ~ By far the best, both of them. The one with the fire ears could look better with a cute Koala nose, but other than that good. The other one, really cute, but the flame should be in a bit more creative place if you ask me, that is just an opinion tho.
Not bad, I guess. I'd like to see more, with improvements, of course.
 
Remember, with every map there is a story. Well everything else is acceptable though. Now here is my 3rd fakemon regi, Regiwood!
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I like it! It looks like the branches are arms... (duh =P)

I wish I were good at making stuff... (Don't you love the word stuff?)
 
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