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Made it to the third issue before I decided to post.

Anyway, just a few critiques:
- Don't post too many issues at once. It'll givve you more time for comics you might not already have done.
- The speech bubbles. The words are easy to see, but work on the speech bubbles a bit. Maybe make them a light (very light) grey, and instead of the square, use the sort of roundish square (I take it you use paint for the word bubbles?).

But otherwise. I really like this comic so far. Good luck. ;)
 
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Wow this page is old
not that old in real time, but since the comics birth
basically now there over 100 issues, theres also a drunkduck page, I've improved and such
w00t, I finally checked this uber old page
 
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