Misfit_PM
Wandering
I decided to try another fanfic... My other was a colaboration, and it's dieing... So, here's my story.
Any similarities to other stories are completely coincidental.
Shadows
Prologue
<Not a star in the sky!>
<It’s because we’re to close to the city. Let’s go back before we’re caught!>
Two sets of paws tread softly on the cold frozen ground. The two figures stopped next to a bush and peered over it to the city beyond.
A fox-like face accompanied one like a rat. The fox was brown with big black eyes. Around its neck was a mane of light brown fur. Its small nose twitched. The rat was purple, but it had a white stomach and paws. Its two front teeth gleamed in the light of a nearby lamp that lit a path that snaked through a small park. The park stood vacant on the outskirts of the city.
<We have a job to do!> The rat hissed through its teeth. <Going back will only delay our mandatory task!>
<I’m going to kill you if we get caught!> The fox began. <Just be glad you’re a Rattata and not a big Eevee like me, Kitara!>
<Quiet, Tali! We will get caught if you keep talking!> The rodent snapped.
An uneasy silence filled the air.
The two animal’s gaze never left the city.
The city was dotted with lights from many different buildings. Several buildings towered over the others, making them look inferior. Oblivious to the lack of natural light, many people carried on in their various actions. The roads visible from the creatures’ vantage point were relatively occupied by a few stragglers on their way home. Horns and sirens occasionally filled the air.
The Eevee's shallow breathing caught the other’s attention.
<Scared?> Kitara inquired as if they shared the same feeling.
<Yeah…> Tali looked at its companion. <Let’s go…>
Simultaneously, they rose and resumed their trek toward the city. Darting from cover to cover, they made their way to the edge of the park. They hugged the edge of a small brick house, praying the shadows would hide them. The odd pair ran swiftly across the now vacant street and entered an ally on the other side. They snaked through the allies, trying to stay in the darkest areas they could find. All the while, they watched each other’s backs.
<Where is he again?> Tali asked.
<Here!> They stopped in front of a small manhole that was lit by a small street lamp. Cars could be heard and seen on the nearby street. The creatures looked around uneasily in the exposed area, their senses heightened in order to detect even the smallest visitor.
<WHAT?!?! I’m not going down there!> The Eevee exploded, imagining the smell underneith the metal cover. Tali took a step back and wispered, <No sane Pokémon would go down there!>
<Well, we’re not exactly sane, now are we?> Kitara reasoned, looking around to make sure they were still alone. <Coming into the city like this…>
<Fine…> Reluctantly, Tali returned to its companion's side. <But, you go first.>
Nodding, Kitara began to lift the manhole cover. Tali helped after another cautious examination of their surroundings. When the cover was removed, the Pokémon began their decent, their bodies slowly being engulfed by the darkness. Their departure left the ally empty.
Suddenly, a blood curdling shriek filled the air, slicing through the silence like a freshly sharpened blade.
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So that's the Prologue...
Any comments? Imput?
Any similarities to other stories are completely coincidental.
Shadows
Prologue
<Not a star in the sky!>
<It’s because we’re to close to the city. Let’s go back before we’re caught!>
Two sets of paws tread softly on the cold frozen ground. The two figures stopped next to a bush and peered over it to the city beyond.
A fox-like face accompanied one like a rat. The fox was brown with big black eyes. Around its neck was a mane of light brown fur. Its small nose twitched. The rat was purple, but it had a white stomach and paws. Its two front teeth gleamed in the light of a nearby lamp that lit a path that snaked through a small park. The park stood vacant on the outskirts of the city.
<We have a job to do!> The rat hissed through its teeth. <Going back will only delay our mandatory task!>
<I’m going to kill you if we get caught!> The fox began. <Just be glad you’re a Rattata and not a big Eevee like me, Kitara!>
<Quiet, Tali! We will get caught if you keep talking!> The rodent snapped.
An uneasy silence filled the air.
The two animal’s gaze never left the city.
The city was dotted with lights from many different buildings. Several buildings towered over the others, making them look inferior. Oblivious to the lack of natural light, many people carried on in their various actions. The roads visible from the creatures’ vantage point were relatively occupied by a few stragglers on their way home. Horns and sirens occasionally filled the air.
The Eevee's shallow breathing caught the other’s attention.
<Scared?> Kitara inquired as if they shared the same feeling.
<Yeah…> Tali looked at its companion. <Let’s go…>
Simultaneously, they rose and resumed their trek toward the city. Darting from cover to cover, they made their way to the edge of the park. They hugged the edge of a small brick house, praying the shadows would hide them. The odd pair ran swiftly across the now vacant street and entered an ally on the other side. They snaked through the allies, trying to stay in the darkest areas they could find. All the while, they watched each other’s backs.
<Where is he again?> Tali asked.
<Here!> They stopped in front of a small manhole that was lit by a small street lamp. Cars could be heard and seen on the nearby street. The creatures looked around uneasily in the exposed area, their senses heightened in order to detect even the smallest visitor.
<WHAT?!?! I’m not going down there!> The Eevee exploded, imagining the smell underneith the metal cover. Tali took a step back and wispered, <No sane Pokémon would go down there!>
<Well, we’re not exactly sane, now are we?> Kitara reasoned, looking around to make sure they were still alone. <Coming into the city like this…>
<Fine…> Reluctantly, Tali returned to its companion's side. <But, you go first.>
Nodding, Kitara began to lift the manhole cover. Tali helped after another cautious examination of their surroundings. When the cover was removed, the Pokémon began their decent, their bodies slowly being engulfed by the darkness. Their departure left the ally empty.
Suddenly, a blood curdling shriek filled the air, slicing through the silence like a freshly sharpened blade.
---x---x---x---x-----x---x---x---x---
So that's the Prologue...
Any comments? Imput?
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