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Art?
- Thread starter Treecko Girl
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First of all, stop beating yourself up. Seriously. It's annoying.
Next, to your actual drawings. All of them seem to have extremely gaunt cheeks; from the side of their eyes to their chin is a diagonal line. That's really odd looking. Also, their necks are giraffish.. really thin and really long. Slim is one thing, but those twigs couldn't hold up a head any day. Speaking of slim, from what I can see in your pictures, all these girls have incredibly hourglass figures. It's a little too exaggerated.
Onto your strong points. I like the way you draw your eyes, they really stand out and show the person's emotion. Also, the way you ruffle their shirts looks pretty neat.
I hope you understood my criticism and will continue making more.
Next, to your actual drawings. All of them seem to have extremely gaunt cheeks; from the side of their eyes to their chin is a diagonal line. That's really odd looking. Also, their necks are giraffish.. really thin and really long. Slim is one thing, but those twigs couldn't hold up a head any day. Speaking of slim, from what I can see in your pictures, all these girls have incredibly hourglass figures. It's a little too exaggerated.
Onto your strong points. I like the way you draw your eyes, they really stand out and show the person's emotion. Also, the way you ruffle their shirts looks pretty neat.
I hope you understood my criticism and will continue making more.
Lucariofan-atic
avant ǝpɹɐƃ painter☆
The critic(s) i have here is:
-Their necks are very long and thin, same like what BynineB said.
-Their body is smaller compared to the face, in my opinion.
The comments i have here:
-You're good at drawing eyes, they can show their emotions.
-Their necks are very long and thin, same like what BynineB said.
-Their body is smaller compared to the face, in my opinion.
The comments i have here:
-You're good at drawing eyes, they can show their emotions.
I agree with BynineB its really annoying when people know they're good and they say "Wahh I'm awful" to get sympathy.
They're very good and I like them. The faces aren't exactly 100% anatomically correct but that just adds to the uniqueness of your style. I'd recommend trying to draw whole bodies and then maybe colour. Carry on with the ***** heads for now though, I think you need to build up your confidence since you think you're so bad.
Anyway, well done.
They're very good and I like them. The faces aren't exactly 100% anatomically correct but that just adds to the uniqueness of your style. I'd recommend trying to draw whole bodies and then maybe colour. Carry on with the ***** heads for now though, I think you need to build up your confidence since you think you're so bad.
Anyway, well done.
Nidoprince
Well-Known Member
You should post your honest opinion about your artwork, not just posting that they are horrible so that people come and say "Noooo! Your artwork is wonderful!" And, if you really thought that they were horrible, then you wouldn't put that up, because mainly this forum is to share artwork, I think it is very wrong to rate it. I mean rate it like rating the thread and not critiqueing. Well, onto my critique: The necks are very tall and thin, and the shoulders are a little small...except in the second one which the shoulder was too big...At least I think that's a shoulder. I do like the expressions on them, though. I think that these would look fabulous colored.
sweet_piplup123
I lost the game?!?!
Well, you're a lot better than what I could do with a pair of pencils... ^^;
The first one has a rather long neck, but the second and thrid ones are alright. And I think the eyes for your characters are quite interesting
The first one has a rather long neck, but the second and thrid ones are alright. And I think the eyes for your characters are quite interesting
.:Lemon Tea:.
Crystallized decay
Necks are too long, proportion is off, and it doesn't seem you have grasped the concept of perspective exactly. Anyways, don't beat yourself up to much about it if you are actually beating yourself about it. It doesn't seem that you're inconfident in your drawings since you are actually posting them.
Well. It takes time. Have fun with it. Not to be offensive or anything, but the title is 'Art?' You posted in fanart and there are pictures. Obviously it is art. If someone posted two dots on a sheet of paper with the title 'Art'. It is art. Sorry if I seem mean, I'm a perfectionist when drawing and looking at drawings so if something is off, I berate myself and others often. Don't take it offensively please. Keep up the work?
Well. It takes time. Have fun with it. Not to be offensive or anything, but the title is 'Art?' You posted in fanart and there are pictures. Obviously it is art. If someone posted two dots on a sheet of paper with the title 'Art'. It is art. Sorry if I seem mean, I'm a perfectionist when drawing and looking at drawings so if something is off, I berate myself and others often. Don't take it offensively please. Keep up the work?
Treecko Girl
Sweet V
Sorry about that guys.
Thank you for the comments and I'll keep working on it.
^.^
Thank you for the comments and I'll keep working on it.
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Nidoprince
Well-Known Member
One more note: I actually like the titles for the artwork. The "Argh!" one suits it, because the girl looks mad in the picture, and in the "My eyes!" one, the eyes are especially big, and the "..." is good because all of other ones are so serious, and she's so happy that when you add them up you get "..." Seriously, they're good titles, and most of the ways someone learns is when they do it without even trying.