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Flash Animation

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Rukaria

onechance.
I haven't seen any of these on SPPF before so opefully this might attract some people. ^^

It's a flash of Beautifly.

Clickey

It's my second flash so don't kill me too much for making tons of mistakes. I don't mind some but just not too much.

I had no reference for this animation, so beautifly might not be quite right.

Uhh, yeah. If you have a Sheezy tell me.
 
Its very good but you could try to make the clouds come from inside the border.
I can't give more C&C becuase I've never tried Flash Player before.
 
I like the way you draw, and the background and clouds have a nice level of detail to them. The eyes on that Beautifly are so gosh darn cute too. xD

There are some parts I would change if it were me though. First off, you only show one wing there. Beautifly needs two to fly. :p Secondly, you have the bobbing motion backwards. When beautifly brings its wings down, it should bob upwards, since the force of the lift would move it that way. Likewise, when it brings its wings upward, it should sink down, because it's not generating any lift at that point.

Also, you've got the wing going up and down, but the way it's situated on the body, it should really be flapping at more of a slanted angle. I'm not sure how to describe it exactly, lol. Anyway, as you gain more experience, you'll get better. :p Try not to rely too much on tweens if you can avoid it. They're not meant to show important movement such as your wings flapping, but they do well for the bobbing motions and general translations from one side of the screen to another. :p
 
Shuko said:
I like the way you draw, and the background and clouds have a nice level of detail to them. The eyes on that Beautifly are so gosh darn cute too. xD

There are some parts I would change if it were me though. First off, you only show one wing there. Beautifly needs two to fly. :p Secondly, you have the bobbing motion backwards. When beautifly brings its wings down, it should bob upwards, since the force of the lift would move it that way. Likewise, when it brings its wings upward, it should sink down, because it's not generating any lift at that point.

Also, you've got the wing going up and down, but the way it's situated on the body, it should really be flapping at more of a slanted angle. I'm not sure how to describe it exactly, lol. Anyway, as you gain more experience, you'll get better. :p Try not to rely too much on tweens if you can avoid it. They're not meant to show important movement such as your wings flapping, but they do well for the bobbing motions and general translations from one side of the screen to another. :p
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Thanks for the bobbing tip. I'll keep that in mind next time :)
The second wing was not needed because I didn't put the other feet and hands in either. It was meant to look flat and cartoony.

Thankyou so much for the comment. It was very useful to me, thankyou for taking the time to explain ^_^

rainbow_xtina said:
Good job! It's so nicely done! what program did you use?
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Flash 8. Not much else that is possible to use...

I have a Flygon coming up soon. Different style and different idea...you'll see....
 
OMG
That is sooo good!
Well done!
 
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