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[fullerfast]

OK since im in such a good mood ill try my hand at putting up a decent ev set

Scyther @ muscle band
Adamant @ tehnitian
252 atk 252 speed 4 hp
brick break
aerial ace
bug bite
Swords Dance

My lead IM NOT EVOLVING HIM UNLESS OTHERWISE CONVINCED
I want the speed of scyther and not the defense of sizor.
Swords dance then attack
protect is there as a filler

Marowak @ Thick Club
Jolly @ rock head
252 atk 129 def 129 hp
Earthquake
swords dance
fire punch
Rock Slide

Thick Club increases marowks attack plus he blocks most of the teams weaknesses
Earthquake stabs and aerial ace

Lanturn @ Leftovers
Modest @ Volt Absorb
252 hp 129 sp atk 129 sp def
Ice beam
Charge Beam
Surf
discharge/thunderbolt

Surf Primary stab while thunder bolt/discharge secondary stab.
Charge beam raises sp atk

Gallade @ scope lens
Adamant @ steadfast
252 atk 252 speed 4 def
cross chop
Psycho Cut
Leaf Blade/ stone edge
night slash

cross chop secondary stab with psycho cut as a primary stab with leaf blade for ground, rock, and water types

Houndoom @ wise glases
Modest @ Flash Fire
252 sp atk 129 speed 129 hp
flamethrower
dark pulse
Nasty plot
Hidden power (fighting)

heat wave main stab with dark pulse being the secondary stab and protect being a filler for lack of a better special attack

Porygon Z @ ???
modest @ adaptability
tri attack
252 sp atk 252 hp 4 def
ice beam
Nasty Plot
Recover

Tri attack main stab and ice beam for dragons
nasty plot for sp atk boost and recover self explanitory

This is the first true team that i made for actual use in fourth gen games out of the storyline so suggestions help

 

[TyranitarFan]

all you need is 1 one click of a mouse, not 3

 

[Soroft]

Your grammar and mechanics apall me, tbh. Spell Check through MS Word helps if you don't have good grammar otherwise.

Fury Cutter with Scyther's defenses won't last long. Even with Metronome, it won't do much anyway. Bug Bite over X-Scissor for overall better-ness. Adamant or Jolly imo.

Jolly for Marowak, he won't need Adamant with the Thick Club.

Lanturn's moves look okay.

Toxic over Poison Jab if it's for poison, it'll badly poison and poison more often. Hence the name Toxic.

Houndoom wants Flash Fire pl0x. Always pick it. It'll grant instant immunity against fire-type moves and give you a boost above the enemy. Early Bird is pretty useless when items can wake up instantly. Nasty Plot over Shadow Ball, I don't remember there being something it has over Dark Pulse, especially when Dark Pulse has STAB.

Modest Porygon. Simple.

All-in-all, your team has a few pokemon that are relying on hax for moves, and that's the only reason you have them. Poison Jab only has 20% poison chance and if you have it for that reason, then switch out for Toxic. Tri-Attack has 20% for status ailments.

My internet is a little slow right now, so I'm sorry about not giving a complete rate.

Hope it helps.

 

[ungulateman]

Poison Jab has 30% chance of posion, actually. I'd still go with Toxic if it's intended to posion your opponent, rather than deal damage.

 

[fullerfast]

Sorry about the grammer normaly fix what I see but i was just trying to flip between op and other sites double checking movesets (multitasking does bad things to you)

Otherwise thanks for the complements I worked on the team for what felt like forever half of the time spent just picking a team with good synergy and the other half good movesets
just feels nice when you're a noob and get complemented by one of the elites =)

 

[ungulateman]

Scyther @ Muscle Band
Adamant @ Technician
Brick Break / Quick Attack
Aerial Ace
bug bite
Swords Dance

Marowak @ Thick Club
Jolly @ rock head
Earthquake
Fire Punch
Swords Dance
Rock Slide

SD Marowak pretty much OHKOs anything in the game after a boost, thanks to Thick Club.

Lanturn @ Leftovers
Modest @ Volt Absorb
Ice Beam
Charge Beam
Surf
Discharge / Thunderbolt

Gallade @ Muscle Band / Scope Lens
Adamant @ steadfast
Close Combat / Cross Chop
Psycho Cut
Leaf Blade / Stone Edge
Night Slash

Houndoom @ Wise Glasses
Modest @ Flash Fire
Flamethrower
dark pulse
Nasty plot
Hidden Power [Fighting] / Will-O-Wisp

Porygon Z @ ???
modest @ adaptability
tri attack
ice beam
Nasty Plot
Recover

I multitask all the time when making teams. I just spend some time writing my descriptions. Comments in bold.