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My first sprites
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Sabonea_Masukippa
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Well, if they are your first attempts then they are quite good recolours.
1) You didn't use the deafault colous from paint (I don't think)
2) You saved in PNG, not jpeg,
3)You recoloured the outline as well as the body of the sprite, so kudos.
However, with Eevee's neck fur , you've recoloured the lines purple and it distracts from the sprite. Try using a brown or grey, because the purple is too bright. Also, (and this is just me), Charizard's wings are too bright, and although you used the original shading of the sprite, the light green looks out of place.
Anyway, good job. Now, try something more challenging
1) You didn't use the deafault colous from paint (I don't think)
2) You saved in PNG, not jpeg,
3)You recoloured the outline as well as the body of the sprite, so kudos.
However, with Eevee's neck fur , you've recoloured the lines purple and it distracts from the sprite. Try using a brown or grey, because the purple is too bright. Also, (and this is just me), Charizard's wings are too bright, and although you used the original shading of the sprite, the light green looks out of place.
Anyway, good job. Now, try something more challenging
Psychic
Really and truly
^-^ Very cool, Kneecaps! You certainly chose some interesting colour combinations, and the recolour job looks nearly perfect.
For Eevee, though the purple's a bit bright I otherwise like the combination. As mentioned, the only problem is that the outlining for the yellow parts (on the mane and tail) are pruple when they should be a dark yellow/brown. Don't be afraid to play around to make more colours.
Lapras looks great, and the only thing I can think to say is that black is a really hard colours to shade with, so take the time to experiment with it. The problem here is that the shadows/highlights of black were a bit too hard to distinguish. Otherwise well-done.
The light green highlighting on Charizard's wings is a tad too light - bringing it down a bit would do well. But I like the colours you chose - Ivysaur, right? Well, it's a cool look for the dragon - very neat.
Keep working at it, you're doing great for a beginner, and I look forward to seeing your revamp! ^^
~Psychic
For Eevee, though the purple's a bit bright I otherwise like the combination. As mentioned, the only problem is that the outlining for the yellow parts (on the mane and tail) are pruple when they should be a dark yellow/brown. Don't be afraid to play around to make more colours.
Lapras looks great, and the only thing I can think to say is that black is a really hard colours to shade with, so take the time to experiment with it. The problem here is that the shadows/highlights of black were a bit too hard to distinguish. Otherwise well-done.
The light green highlighting on Charizard's wings is a tad too light - bringing it down a bit would do well. But I like the colours you chose - Ivysaur, right? Well, it's a cool look for the dragon - very neat.
Keep working at it, you're doing great for a beginner, and I look forward to seeing your revamp! ^^
~Psychic
I'm glad you like them, and thanks for the criticism
Anyways, here's my first attempt at a revamp (I never noticed that they changed Natu's wing colors until now...):
Oh, and here's a slightly modified version of the Charizard with the wing highlights darkened:
Anyways, here's my first attempt at a revamp (I never noticed that they changed Natu's wing colors until now...):
Oh, and here's a slightly modified version of the Charizard with the wing highlights darkened:
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Pokemanyak
Little VoltTackler
Charizard looks very cool
Sabonea_Masukippa
Well-Known Member
Charizard is an improvement. Very good. And I forgot to say that I really like the lapras!
The revamp is quite good, but some of the shading around the wing seems a little blocky. Try smoothing it a little- it make it look more round.
The revamp is quite good, but some of the shading around the wing seems a little blocky. Try smoothing it a little- it make it look more round.
Well, I enjoy the occasional challenge. What do you have in mind?
Sabonea_Masukippa
Well-Known Member
The improvement on the Natu is great, i think it looks much better now. 
The recolour is well done, but (personally) a little bright. But that's just my dislike of bright colours in the evening shining through. lol. V. good job though.
The recolour is well done, but (personally) a little bright. But that's just my dislike of bright colours in the evening shining through. lol. V. good job though.
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Psychic
Really and truly
Ivysaur, Veunaur, tomato, potato. I was close! XP But anyway, the wings on Charizard look much better now. ^^
tbh, I didn't really a notice a difference between the two Natu revamps. You did a pretty good job on it, though I think the shape needs to be fixed a tad bit more, especially the feet as they look really weird (mainly because of the black diving it through the middle). Also, the darker shadow on the main body needs to be a bit more rounded; at the bottom left it just goes in a straight line when it should curve more to shot the roundness of the body. Otherwise it looks quite good.
I really like the colours you chose for Dodrio. Random, but they look quite cool together - nice choices. Looks great, nothing negative to say about it.
~Psychic
tbh, I didn't really a notice a difference between the two Natu revamps. You did a pretty good job on it, though I think the shape needs to be fixed a tad bit more, especially the feet as they look really weird (mainly because of the black diving it through the middle). Also, the darker shadow on the main body needs to be a bit more rounded; at the bottom left it just goes in a straight line when it should curve more to shot the roundness of the body. Otherwise it looks quite good.
I really like the colours you chose for Dodrio. Random, but they look quite cool together - nice choices. Looks great, nothing negative to say about it.
~Psychic
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As mentioned before, your coloration is awesome. You have a good feel what color to put where, and I especially like the colors on Dodria and Charizard.
Well, I'm by all means no Revamping expert, but that looks pretty good apart from 2 things:
a) As mentioned before, the feet.
b) The wing, I don't know what it is, but it still looks 2nd, maybe 3rd gen to me. I guess this has somethign to do with the black part in it.
Anyway, you're doing great.
So, fusions up next ?
~Bert
Well, I'm by all means no Revamping expert, but that looks pretty good apart from 2 things:
a) As mentioned before, the feet.
b) The wing, I don't know what it is, but it still looks 2nd, maybe 3rd gen to me. I guess this has somethign to do with the black part in it.
Anyway, you're doing great.
So, fusions up next
?~Bert
PetuniaBubbles
Devoted Spriter
Great re-colors. But fix eevees mane, the purple outline on the mane... stands out quite a lot. Your re-vamps is pretty good, I'd like to see mor ere-vamps from you in the future. Your eevee/charmander mix is pretty good, but for some reason the color of the ears seems a little odd. It may just be me, but consider taking a look at it, and changing it.