Just a fallen star
Mmmm ocean very much smells like home to me ^_^The ocean smells like it does at home, though, and sounds like it, and the breeze keeps the heat down to something liveable.
lol I love how excited he is to see something so dangerous and morbid.Pyrite Town! You know that name. It's full of gangsters and robbers and shootouts and cowboys. If anyone's left from Cipher, you bet that's where to find them. And shadow pokémon! You're going to meet shadow pokémon!
Wow. I see that Celebi really messed with Mewtwo's self-esteem. His motivation and typical self-righteous fury is gone.But Mewtwo simply flicks the ball over to you with a spike of psychic force and lets himself be recalled. You look down at the master ball's knobby purple top.
Maybe it's just me or the way I'm reading it, but I'm a bit confused. A needle shoved up in one corner of the house? And like a sewing needle or a syringe?... old threadbare blankets and food wrappers and what you recognize with a fascinated shiver as a needle shoved up in one corner.
Side note, I really like how you describe Pyrite Town as a whole, especially the house that Hypno and the protagonist enter into. You really nail the creepy, not-quite-right atmosphere.
Mmmm this is feeling more and more like a trap to me."Well," Hypno says slowly. "Actually, we were wondering if you wanted us to show you around Pyrite for a bit. Just, ah, to get to know the place."
Mewtwo's too confused to even be annoyed by that. You wanted to give us a tour?
I always forget that Heracross--and probs most bug Pokemon, tbh--can fly. I know it's based off a beetle but flight isn't what I immediately associate beetles with, heh.Heracross lets out a whoop of pleasure and takes to the air for a brief, buzzing flight.
How on earth does that Heracross still have some of her pop left? Was she not able to finish a can in one day? She was certainly sipping it obnoxiously an awful lot earlier."Always happy to have guests!" the bug says, raising her soda in a phantom toast.
Any reason for the asterisk at the beginning? And that this is in quotations instead of italics?*Precisely. Now, I think that's all. We should be going."
Not too much else to say on this chapter. It overall felt quiet and rather calm. I liked it, and the Three Musketeers are easy to warm up to I wonder what Mewtwo's "leads" are, and where it'll all go from this. Excited to find out, and good luck!