AquaRegisteel
Face Oblivion
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Well, I guess that this idea is a spring from my trickling mind.
The premise of this is somewhat simple. I aim to have this topic where writers can write up a scene they have in their head, and put it somewhere quickly.
As this has been advice to beat Writer's Block (writing up scenes), I think that this thread could be a wrecking ball in it's face, and could get many people out of it and back into writing.
Anyways, I'll begin, as I do have a large spot of Writer's Block right now:
Andrew stood motionless in front of the dull, dark tree. His friends had scootched off somewhere around the daylit school, as was customary for them. His long, luminating light red hair flew in the wind, his eyes wrought with a happy-go-lucky expression and his thick lips curled into a twisted smile. He was glancing down at his mirror, checking for any obvious "problems with his hair, preferring it to be perfection.
However, as he swivelled his head (and hair around), something rather odd popped it's head over him, and Andrew could see it in the reflection.
"What...is that?" He wondered, and whipped around, to see a robotic eye glancing down at him; a rather odd sight and a unusual sight in a tree of all places. "Holy sh-" He called, before the voice spoke. "Target acquired, locking attack mechanisms into sequence." It boomed as the eye disappeared into the bushes beneath the tree that was now peeling.
"Oh...OH...OH GOD...OH GOD..!" Stuttered Andrew as he realised exactly what was coming next, and screams were heard around the school as the tree peeled and shook violently, as Andrew stumbled a few meters backwards. The branches revealed a multitude of small guns and rifles, and the thicker branches turned into Gatling Guns. The main trunk now became a steel-hearted monster, as cold and as cruel as it looked. "WEAPONS READY, OPENING FIRE IN SIX, FIVE, FOUR..." It boomed, and he was pegging it past the building. "No, not inside, it'll blow it up!!" His friends yelled, and they were pegging it to the front of the school gates and out of there. "THREE, TWO, ONE, ZERO. OPEN FIRE!" It shouted in a metallic voice. Screeches erupted as bullets flew through the glass, blood spilled on the floors above. The group of friends had headed out of school, and were trying to run down to the Police Station nearby.
The red painted school could well be painted with blood, but out of nowhere a missile flew over their heads as it had passed through the school and hit a house, smashing it into flames. "OH MY!" Jenny screeched and sobbed immediately. A huge shock wave hit them as the explosion was obvious of that of the school. "How the-did it just explode!?" Josh called, and flames and smoke cascaded throughout the school that was once such the building. But Andrew fell to the pavement as his face scrunched up in agony, his vision fading into black...
Go! Beat it to the ground!
Well, I guess that this idea is a spring from my trickling mind.
The premise of this is somewhat simple. I aim to have this topic where writers can write up a scene they have in their head, and put it somewhere quickly.
As this has been advice to beat Writer's Block (writing up scenes), I think that this thread could be a wrecking ball in it's face, and could get many people out of it and back into writing.
Anyways, I'll begin, as I do have a large spot of Writer's Block right now:
Andrew stood motionless in front of the dull, dark tree. His friends had scootched off somewhere around the daylit school, as was customary for them. His long, luminating light red hair flew in the wind, his eyes wrought with a happy-go-lucky expression and his thick lips curled into a twisted smile. He was glancing down at his mirror, checking for any obvious "problems with his hair, preferring it to be perfection.
However, as he swivelled his head (and hair around), something rather odd popped it's head over him, and Andrew could see it in the reflection.
"What...is that?" He wondered, and whipped around, to see a robotic eye glancing down at him; a rather odd sight and a unusual sight in a tree of all places. "Holy sh-" He called, before the voice spoke. "Target acquired, locking attack mechanisms into sequence." It boomed as the eye disappeared into the bushes beneath the tree that was now peeling.
"Oh...OH...OH GOD...OH GOD..!" Stuttered Andrew as he realised exactly what was coming next, and screams were heard around the school as the tree peeled and shook violently, as Andrew stumbled a few meters backwards. The branches revealed a multitude of small guns and rifles, and the thicker branches turned into Gatling Guns. The main trunk now became a steel-hearted monster, as cold and as cruel as it looked. "WEAPONS READY, OPENING FIRE IN SIX, FIVE, FOUR..." It boomed, and he was pegging it past the building. "No, not inside, it'll blow it up!!" His friends yelled, and they were pegging it to the front of the school gates and out of there. "THREE, TWO, ONE, ZERO. OPEN FIRE!" It shouted in a metallic voice. Screeches erupted as bullets flew through the glass, blood spilled on the floors above. The group of friends had headed out of school, and were trying to run down to the Police Station nearby.
The red painted school could well be painted with blood, but out of nowhere a missile flew over their heads as it had passed through the school and hit a house, smashing it into flames. "OH MY!" Jenny screeched and sobbed immediately. A huge shock wave hit them as the explosion was obvious of that of the school. "How the-did it just explode!?" Josh called, and flames and smoke cascaded throughout the school that was once such the building. But Andrew fell to the pavement as his face scrunched up in agony, his vision fading into black...
Go! Beat it to the ground!
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